This is one hot story....I love it and am looking forward to reading more.
Great writing!
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Anonymous08/05/10
Made my loins ache
You are a fantastic writer. This story aside from being very hot was very seductive and heart wrenching as well. Thank You Kindly. Good Journey to You.
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Anonymous09/01/10
I really quite like this story
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Anonymous10/27/11
So good
A nice story.
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Anonymous03/12/12
is that it.?
wheres the start and the end.......
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Anonymous05/24/13
"He put a mug into the microwave . . ." and "The coffee isn't that bad. I wasn't trying to scare you away." - Trust me, if you're boiling water in the microwave, your coffee IS that bad - I think that's what your friends have been trying to tell you . . .
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Hot and Fabulous
This is one hot story....I love it and am looking forward to reading more.
Great writing!
Made my loins ache
You are a fantastic writer. This story aside from being very hot was very seductive and heart wrenching as well. Thank You Kindly. Good Journey to You.
I really quite like this story
So good
A nice story.
is that it.?
wheres the start and the end.......
"He put a mug into the microwave . . ." and "The coffee isn't that bad. I wasn't trying to scare you away." - Trust me, if you're boiling water in the microwave, your coffee IS that bad - I think that's what your friends have been trying to tell you . . .
Loved it!
I didn't know what to expect after the scene in the subway ... it's generally so disgusting and pervy ...
I'm glad it turned into a hot surrender to each other ! ^^
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