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BSTC Day 04

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by Anonymous

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by blackfen08/24/09

loving this series

You are officially my favourite writer on Literotica. I think this series is really great. Your other major work, `How Mom made him state champ` is my all time favourite but this is really shaping up to equal it. Hope you keep going along the same track with this one. 10 out of 10 as usual Klrxo.

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by Anonymous08/24/09

excellent

I agree I keep cumming everyday looking for a new one. I really enjoy the loving side of your stories they are not wham bam but a relationship seems to develop.

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by OnlyaFantasy08/25/09

More of the same

Here's to Todd being meaner to his school mates and their dads by fucking their married moms more and more.

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by Anonymous08/25/09

Amazing series.

please continue this series with todd and his mom. Very nice stories written.

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by Ahabscribe08/25/09

All Hail klrxo!

An amazing continuation of one of the hottest, nastiest, and sexiest stories on Literotica. Your mother and son stories are the stuff of dreams, perhaps of heaven...at least my vision of heaven anyway! Anxiously looking forward to the next!

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by Anonymous08/27/09

Best Series Going

Terrific, keep 'em coming!

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by Anonymous09/25/09

hotttttttttttttt

its really hot but it will be hotter if it turns into a group orgy.

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by Anonymous10/14/09

hot series

great hot series but day 1, 2, 3 are much more hot than 04. new kind of mom/son incest this is. i think you can continue this series. after todd and vicky return home, they r most happy person. one day their father died in accident, vicky get fully sad from happiness, todd help his mom out from sad and slowlly heel her broken heart. at last todds mother get pregnant by him and they start a new life. i think this is a good plot for this series. come back soon.....

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by Anonymous10/21/09

Looking forward to next installment

Awesome job on the series so far.
Enjoyed Todd's domination of the other mom's in this one.
Also Vicky's mixed feelings are being developed nicely.
This is one of the few series I bother to check for an update.
Hope to see it go on for a while.

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by JackRoyal11/29/09

Great series!

Very hot! I'd love to see some continuous stories. You could go in several different ways. Let's see what happens with Todd and Vicky after they get back home, with them continuing their affair behind Todd's father's back. We could also see some of Todd's adventures, as he tries out his new sexual skills with some of the girls from his school. Also, early in the first story, they mention "Aunt Jen," as that was the cover story for their trip to BTSC. Well, maybe next time they can really visit Aunt Jen, let's say she knew that Vicky was taking Todd to that school, and now wants to test him out herself. So Todd spend a week fucking his Aunt and his Mother.

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by Anonymous12/08/09

Really great story

Please continue! Impatiently waiting for your next installment...

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by Tacocarnitas12/31/09

Another please!

Good lord, man! Please please please write another installment. This series is just terrific.

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by Anonymous01/07/10

Fucking excellent!

Ideally I would like to see Todd breed Vicki openly so his dad accepts his cuckold position. This series is so good.

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by rmdexter02/19/10

Perfect!

Just wanted to let you know that the BSTC series is one of the absolute best on the website. Thanks for sharing your talent with the rest of us!

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by woody144107/01/10

BSTC

Fan-Fucking-Tastic. You Are Know Officially My Favourite Author. Cant Wait To Read The Rest Of Your Stories.

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by futballer2007/06/10

wow

best author on this site...fantastic!

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by SunsWetSpot10/11/10

More chapters please

Hi I love some of your work. I think you should definitely continue this one.When they get back home,she has two more sons and Aunt Jen was mentioned as well.Maybe he gets with a few milfs in the neighbourhood...or just use you wicked imagination which is much better than mine.But please please give us more.

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by Lelouch10/14/10

Breaking the tension

Perhaps the reason this series hasn't been continuing is that the author is trying to figure a way out of the jealousy and tension which has been introduced by the other boys discovering Todd's actions with the other moms. I'd suggest one way to break the hard feelings would be for the Goddess to suggest that jealousy is never attractive, and since the boys will need to experience the differences with other women, that all the couples spend a day or two partner swapping. Surely after seeing all the young men in action the moms have some other studs they've fantasized about trying on for size? After helping relieve the other boys' anger, Monique could spend more time with Todd and his mother in a threesome, as she explains her plans to bring her boys to BSTC someday...

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by JCG61910/17/10

This is simply fantastic YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE

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by OnlyaFantasy06/14/11

Chapter 5

When are you ever going to post the next chapter? "Also nearly completed is the next chapter of "BSTC."" You said almost like two years ago. I think we need to give up on this series ever being continued, much less finished. Which is very disappointing.

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by OnlyaFantasy06/14/11

Oops.

I meant one year ago.

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by knshelle09/28/11

WWOOWW

I've read a few hundred mom/son stories on here and that is by far the most awesome. But still, my favorite is:
http://www.literotica.com/s/for-mom-the-son-al so-rises

The detail on seduction, entry and fucking is incredible.

Hope to see a lot more from you in the mom/son genre.

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by luvingmum04/17/12

chapter 5

it deserves five star ,but we need next chapter 5,ok?

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by magic10fingers404/27/12

chapter 5 please

BTW, there are two copies of the same thing for the BSTC series - and chapter 5 is sorely needed - please!

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by 3rdCoastGuy06/05/12

Nice storyline

Kept the story flowing through the days. Could use some editing though. And on this last day (page one) who the hell is Kyle? You replaced the main characters name with another. I loved the story overall but would like to see some editing/corrections made.

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by kennyboy8206/23/12

More please!!

klrxo, as one of your many fans, can I please implore of you that you write another chapter to this fantastic saga of Mom/son fucking - it's quite simply one of the best stories of its kind. You're a master of your craft, and we can't get enough of you!

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by OnlyaFantasy11/28/12

Let down

We are let down by the fact that it has been over a year since you last promised that the next chapter of BSTC was coming soon. OVER A YEAR!! As an erotic writer myself, I may not have written a story in a while, but I don't leave readers hanging for a year in between chapters and tell them that it is coming soon... and then still nothing for a year.

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by mafia_patriarch05/18/13

if only to dream...

I can't remember if I've commented on this series. If you like short,sexy, stacked cougar moms, visit klrxo's house. Rowrr!!.

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by Omniferis06/15/13

post more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please post the next chapter. i want to see what happens between the alpha and the other boys as well as the moms and sons. and what happens with monique, and dose he get with the goddess. and dose his mom get pregnant with all the sex?

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by SyrustheVirus04/02/14

Hot story, but makes one afraid to ever truly trust your wife.....

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by agamotto04/04/14

More to CUM?

Is there going to be a day 5-7? Please write more for this story!

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by rexthebes07/10/14

very sexy

the complete surrender of the mother to her son and his big cock is always a turn on and nobody does it better than klrxo.

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by brokensword107/30/14

awesome

hot hot hot!

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by brokensword108/29/14

do a sequel!

Please do day 5,6,7 etc!

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by jahoney0209/27/14

finish the tale

Are you ever going to finish the week.

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by shadowduster10/19/14

I am right

As I have always said all women think it is their right to lie and cheat on their husbands. But they would cut the balls off of their husband if he found out and got some revenge pussy. Like one woman said she would be jealous if he had sex with anyone but she had a boyfriend and a girlfriend and she would have him take he to their houses and wait for her outside so she could drink and fuck, she said she loved him but treated him so badly.

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by Lancelot5511/23/14

Very GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!

when will chapter5 be posted? CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE THIS STORY TAKES ME.

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by topace08/28/15

6 Years with no update?

Six years and no update klrxo? What a shame...

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