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All Comments on 'Her Dark Lord Ch. 01'

by JoshyLV

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silvertwinzsilvertwinzover 14 years ago
interesting...

your story is creative but the misspellings and odd typos ruined the "flow". with a bit of edit work for that kind of thing, your stories should be just fine. keep writing!!

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