All Comments on 'Honda'

by MissPimp

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very good start.

I enjoyed reading this story, it is a great start. I can't wait to read the remaining chapters. Could you please make the rest of the chapters a tad longer.

jim1974jim1974over 14 years ago
please dont continue

I wish there was a rating lower than zero. This was possibly the worst piece of shit ever posted on lit. Please don't continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
copied

If you want to write a story, even a poor one, at least use your own ideas. I just read the same thing except way better written. It's called the Brooke affairs and it came out just a few days ago. This sucked!

lance gtlance gtover 14 years ago
If you liked my story so much...

leave a comment and say so. Copying is a form of flattery, but this was crap. I saw the previous comment and then read this pile and was disgusted you could be so blatant in your plagarism. LanceGT

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Brooke is a spambot

who has sent this idea to many people (incluidng me twice). Haven't read the stories, but it is possible that the were arrived at independtly. for a full description of the rest of Brooke's ideas, read "Brooke Jackson's Story" by antaeusq.

lance gtlance gtover 14 years ago
My apologies to you

I was shocked to find I had been taken for a ride like the rest of the writers who were sent Emails by "Brooke". As an after thought of this, if anyone is interested in seeing this slut, send me an Email with a return address and I'll be more than happy to send them to you. I told her to get lost after finding out about her bullshit. I enjoy readers who want me to write for them if they have a good story line, but this was a pathetic excuse for attention by a sick twisted girl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Still

A piece of shit story no matter why it was written.

StoryTeller07StoryTeller07over 14 years ago
Oh! Dear! Such nasty little fascist!

So a lot of us have been spammed! Thought it a bit wierd the way the first email appeared. It does't matter though for I enjoyed writing my vesion of the story and it was interesting how the same ideas became translated into different stories. My story, version, was written several week ago and only posted recently. This is not the only one and any author shouldn't mind, especially if this stroy isn;t as good as theirs! I always wonder why people have to slam a story so hard. Are they fascists? Followers of Hitler burning books! Experiment with ideas and words, enjoy the writing experience! Thanks for writing this story and sharing! Storyteller07

StoryTeller07StoryTeller07over 14 years ago
To Anonymous

Hi, to whoever it was who warned me about Brooke - thanks! You mentioned some good points that I hadn't thought of.

To MissPimp - sorry to use your story comments to contact soemone else. Gave your story full points in compensation!

Promise to read your other stories too, regards storyteller07

reinvestorreinvestorover 14 years ago
Implausible...

The nipple-piercing was pretty dumb. Totally implausible. Yours is not the only story that has implausible moments, but that was a bit unusual, especially if Brooke is a black girl, like me. Wouldn't happen.

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