by MissPimp
I enjoyed reading this story, it is a great start. I can't wait to read the remaining chapters. Could you please make the rest of the chapters a tad longer.
I wish there was a rating lower than zero. This was possibly the worst piece of shit ever posted on lit. Please don't continue this story.
If you want to write a story, even a poor one, at least use your own ideas. I just read the same thing except way better written. It's called the Brooke affairs and it came out just a few days ago. This sucked!
leave a comment and say so. Copying is a form of flattery, but this was crap. I saw the previous comment and then read this pile and was disgusted you could be so blatant in your plagarism. LanceGT
who has sent this idea to many people (incluidng me twice). Haven't read the stories, but it is possible that the were arrived at independtly. for a full description of the rest of Brooke's ideas, read "Brooke Jackson's Story" by antaeusq.
I was shocked to find I had been taken for a ride like the rest of the writers who were sent Emails by "Brooke". As an after thought of this, if anyone is interested in seeing this slut, send me an Email with a return address and I'll be more than happy to send them to you. I told her to get lost after finding out about her bullshit. I enjoy readers who want me to write for them if they have a good story line, but this was a pathetic excuse for attention by a sick twisted girl.
So a lot of us have been spammed! Thought it a bit wierd the way the first email appeared. It does't matter though for I enjoyed writing my vesion of the story and it was interesting how the same ideas became translated into different stories. My story, version, was written several week ago and only posted recently. This is not the only one and any author shouldn't mind, especially if this stroy isn;t as good as theirs! I always wonder why people have to slam a story so hard. Are they fascists? Followers of Hitler burning books! Experiment with ideas and words, enjoy the writing experience! Thanks for writing this story and sharing! Storyteller07
Hi, to whoever it was who warned me about Brooke - thanks! You mentioned some good points that I hadn't thought of.
To MissPimp - sorry to use your story comments to contact soemone else. Gave your story full points in compensation!
Promise to read your other stories too, regards storyteller07
The nipple-piercing was pretty dumb. Totally implausible. Yours is not the only story that has implausible moments, but that was a bit unusual, especially if Brooke is a black girl, like me. Wouldn't happen.