Doesn't do it for me, no thanks but good writing. Can't believe she acts this way with her husband, if she did she wouldn't need to cheat.
You narrative was excellent. Good use of language... read as more than just a "cheap thrill". I look forward to your next piece.
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Doesn't do it for me, no thanks but good writing. Can't believe she acts this way with her husband, if she did she wouldn't need to cheat.
Well written...
You narrative was excellent. Good use of language... read as more than just a "cheap thrill". I look forward to your next piece.
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