thanks for the story makes me want to find a trainer and lose some weight. Mike from Texas
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Anonymous08/28/09
WOW WOW WOW
This series is just SOOOOOOOO HOT! I think the wife has guilty conscience, she wanted that guy and maybe played more than she is letting on...Time will tell as you continue this wonderful series!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A Masterfully -Told Tale From Many Story telling Aspects (but)...
If I had to guess why there's so few comments on this story I would venture that in this series the lead has minimal or no remorse for his out of bounds behavior. I know the author can do that so it's apparently a choice. In this series his lack of hesitation , trepidations can be borderline sociopathic without even considering the narcissism angle making it hard to identify with the leading characters. I'm quibbling however and glossing over strengths that you have as an author that others have covered heretofore . Thank you so much for the pleasure given in this and other stories.
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Anonymous05/06/12
Stop begging !
I'm getting a bit bloody bored of you begging for feedback. Just write the story already and let people comment how - and if - they want !
The story is fine. Your begging is not.
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Anonymous04/17/13
Three's fun
Time for a threesome with both sisters
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Anonymous07/08/13
Good build up
I like the build up in this series. A little more remorse at times from the sister in law might make it more believable, but a lot of authors overdue the guilt so who knows.
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thanks for the story makes me want to find a trainer and lose some weight. Mike from Texas
WOW WOW WOW
This series is just SOOOOOOOO HOT! I think the wife has guilty conscience, she wanted that guy and maybe played more than she is letting on...Time will tell as you continue this wonderful series!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great Story
Awesome story. Looking forward to the next part.
Excellent, Love this series
I'm at a loss for the proper words. Just know I will hate when you end it. By the way, Is the wife cheating too.
part 4?
this is great! i want to know where the wife got her inspiration! what happens next with jenny?
Holy Shit that was fucking good
They make such a good couple, I hope that they can really get together. Fucking well written and really hot sex. Thanks for the rush.....Rich
A Masterfully -Told Tale From Many Story telling Aspects (but)...
If I had to guess why there's so few comments on this story I would venture that in this series the lead has minimal or no remorse for his out of bounds behavior. I know the author can do that so it's apparently a choice. In this series his lack of hesitation , trepidations can be borderline sociopathic without even considering the narcissism angle making it hard to identify with the leading characters. I'm quibbling however and glossing over strengths that you have as an author that others have covered heretofore . Thank you so much for the pleasure given in this and other stories.
Stop begging !
I'm getting a bit bloody bored of you begging for feedback. Just write the story already and let people comment how - and if - they want !
The story is fine. Your begging is not.
Three's fun
Time for a threesome with both sisters
Good build up
I like the build up in this series. A little more remorse at times from the sister in law might make it more believable, but a lot of authors overdue the guilt so who knows.
Getting hotter and hotter!
Not bad for someone who wasn't allowed to go "all he way." Makes one wonder what will happen when he's finally granted unrestricted use of her body.
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