All Comments on '10.55 Ch. 03'

by SylviaG

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
Very good, a well written story

Just a sweet loving story of a mother and son finding happiness amongst themselves. A well planned and executed story. Thanks .....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very Sweet

Although naughty... this story fits its categories famously.

I assume this was the last chapter. Thanks for one of the best Mother/Son reads in a long while.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
I so enjoyed this

I'm glad all drawings stayed as fantasy. I could not have read this story if the mother was forced to any of that for real.

floaturboatfloaturboatover 14 years ago
Amazing

Great story. Cudos S.G for a great series. I am adding you to my favorites!!!

Thanks for writing.

tatlockstatlocksover 14 years ago
great story...

really enjoyed this, human, sexy and insightful. Thank you. would love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Stunning series!

I am so glad I stumbled on this series. Will take a look at whatever else you write.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
to drawn out..

I like son and mother stories esp.ones where the son takes the mother while she's and unwilling partner. This would have been a great story but it was so long and lagged in intensity from beginning to end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
sincere

Good; no fatiguing details and I even tend to believe the writer may be a woman.

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenalmost 14 years ago
Ending

The ending was nice leaving off at were it all began and explaining the very title... which I thought oddly kinky, once it was revealed why it was what it was.

tracysatintracysatinover 13 years ago
So erotic

Thank you for such an erotic story, it was so believable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Amazing

Thanks for a great story, absolutly amazing.

I thought I was there as well having a great view,

very well written looking forward to more stories from you

easily a 5 rating. Again thanks for a great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great read!

There was so much human-ness in this story, so much emotion. Damaged people healing each other. My god, what an amazing story. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

outstanding....sensible yet sexy..pliful yet pervert

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
farts smell better than this

it would have been fun and sexy if "Mum" fucked her next door neighbor, the fat lady or someone else.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
garage drawing

i love the description of the drawing of her in the garage an id love to see it in reallife as a actual drawing

ken0001ken0001over 11 years ago
Tough enough!

I truly liked this10.55,, It kept me wanting to read more.. I would like a sequel where they followed up on the drawings in real life.. Mom with the whip on Ruby's ass with son and ex watching.. Don't you just hate getting advice from dumb readers suggesting how you should write your story? Ken

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 11 years ago
You

are one contorted woman.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
So very well done

This perfectly wraps everything up and that saddens me because the eclectic writing and character development were so well done that I am left wanting more. I hope you'll come out of retirement and once again enthral us.

trashcan44trashcan44almost 11 years ago
It came recommended.

This story was recommended to me and I'm glad I read it. The characters were strong and believable and just how hot would it be to see all your naughty little fantasies displayed in artful detail before your eyes. I really liked picturing the drawings where Ruby was dominating her. I would love to read that story: new tart dominating submissive ex. Hint, hint SylviaG!

SouthLondonerSouthLondonerover 9 years ago
Bravo. A real good sexy read.

Three of three, well done. I loved 'em all. Very sexy, and very well written. I'm now looking forward to reading more of yours. Regards [literally] from South London.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Yummy!

Just Yummy!

thebug37thebug37over 8 years ago
Art for Art's sake

Definitely a twist in story telling. Enjoyable and the best of the first three. Will there be more to match your five star effort?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Excellent Story

Very well written.

Sexy story..

Being from the Americas.. "Bloody" is a terrible adjective to use before "panties or pussy."

Sorry,

Terrific piece though.

RANDOG61RANDOG61almost 7 years ago
DAAAAMN

I LIKED THE STORY BUT IS A STORY OF A FUCKED UP MOTHER AND AN EVEN MORE FUCKED UP SON! YOU SUPPOSE THERE ARE PEOPLE THIS FUCKED UP IN THIS FUCKED UP WORLD?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Great story I know watching porn movie when my mother came in family room and sat down asked what I was watching.told her porn movie woman with big tits.she saw the tv watching woman getting gangbanged with every guy fucking her and cum inside her.we started watching it together and I moved my hand grabbed her huge tits and pinched her large nipples real hard she let out scream.told take that night gown off and she did just looked at her naked body and told her to get on your back spread your legs.once I saw her cunt she had lot of pubic hair between them so I took my clothes off got on top of her into 69 position shoved my cock in her mouth down her throat then I buried my face in her cunt.made her cum and I shot my load down her throat she gagged just kept it there until I pulled out.i was still hard spun around rammed my cock in her cunt hard started fucking her getting ready cum in her cunt and once I did she cane again.about 2 weeks later she told me you got me pregnant I looked said I did my job and said you don't need to wear clothes now cause once we get down fucking me cumming in your cunt.told her I want to see that cum leak out between your legs and if my friends come over you will let them fuck you too.even told her that there going to be gangbanged here too.the guys will be doing you bareback fucking you too

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
well done

SylviaG, you succed in so few pages so much to tell.Wow, i should be upset, lol, after Adam and Eve, Cain and Abel was missing..but i am glad, my dear. Nice story, you win a lot of fans. I am happy to read your stories, i will search for others. Thank you, darling, for your very good work. G.M.

P.S. Excuse my english, is not my language

RanDog025RanDog025almost 6 years ago
A 10 STAR STORY

IF I COULD, IF 10 STARS WERE AVAILABLE! I LOVED YOUR STORIES. I WISH YOU'D COME BACK AND WRITE OR MAYBE YOU ARE NOW SOMEONE ELSE BUT I'M GOING TO MISS YOU SilviaG! I LOVE YOU!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
EXCELLENT !!

Top-notched writing.

Well worded - well assembled...and fucking hot !!

Your story has blessed me with several intense orgasms.

Thank you so much...and, please...DO CONTINUE !

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
VERY GOOD STORY, ALL 3 CHAPTERS

MOM GOT HER NEW BOOBS, AND ADAM GOT TO GO TO ART COLLAGE .OH!!YA!! DAD GOT RUBY. HA!!...........................THANKS

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Keep on going

I love the story so far. I would like to see you in a threesome with Adam controlling it and also you pregnant with Adams baby.

Harvey8910Harvey8910about 3 years ago

i loved the story and gave it 5 stars. I wondered if anyone at college caught on that the woman living with that promising art student was his mom and his lover. They seem happy with the situation. More power to them. Great story.

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