All Comments on 'A Daemon's Heart Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
please continue

please please continue this story is great i love it i want to know what happens next

Raven_FLSTCRaven_FLSTCover 14 years ago
More please....

I really like this and check back regularly to see what's new...thank you for the post! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
omfg!

this story just pulls me in. i love the characters and the plot. i always check back for the next installment so please continue:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Love this story.

I couldn't stop reading and had to read all the chapters you have completed. I love this story so much and hope that you will finish it when you have time. I will keep checking. It is such a beautiful story.

RainezDemisexDRainezDemisexDover 14 years ago
mooore plzz xD

now that im finally caught up i cant help but start to imagine whats gunna happen next. your writting is inpecable *yells for spell check* lol i love the way the story is starting to delevlop. <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
please finish!!

OMG!! i love this story!! please, when you have time, finish it, i love the way you developed the characters, you are an amazing writer, and i hope to read more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Talented

You are an amazingly talented writer. I love your stories. Please keep writing. Waiting with baited breath for what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
:D

You've got me at the edge of my seat' i can barely manage to wait for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
i cant wait!

this is really good. i cant wait for the next part. hopefully here soon!!!!

katgoddesskatgoddessalmost 14 years ago
Really good

I would love to see you write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
sequel please :)

sequel please :)

canndcanndover 13 years ago

There is nothing worse than reading a story and seeing that it might not be finished! Please write the rest of the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
ENDING,PLEASE

I guess i need to start at the end to see if a story actually has an ending before getting into it,only to be left hanging,far too many unfinished stories,but what is here was very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Its Good

Please finish this story it is too good to leave un finished.

PinkPantheressPinkPantheressover 13 years ago
Ending Please!!!!!

You cannot just leave us hanging after we followed you through all this! Please please for my sanity and the sanity of others finish the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is such a good story i can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very good!

I love the magic and supernatural stuff. The characters are great. I want to read more.

AyamiAyamiover 13 years ago
LOVE IT

please finish it love the way u'v written it out please let me know wen u have some more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Awsome

I think this story is great i no you probably gone and 4got bout it but i really wish you would finish it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great story!!!

It would be wonderful to read more!! Great characters, plot development, dialogue, and writing style. Good premise too, the mythological figures are slightly familiar but a variation of the theme. It's new and different. :)

Elfin69Elfin69almost 13 years ago
Please continue

I have followed your fic from the beginning and hope that you will continue. I cannot wait wait to see what happens with Elyah and how she will get even with those who hurt her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I love the storey so far and cant wait to read more. you have amazing ideas and I truelly hope there is many more chapters to come

ladybug71ladybug71over 12 years ago
Please, please, PLEASE....

do not be one of those authors on here that starts an awesome story, only to not finish it!!! I love how this story has progressed past the first chapter and has gotten to a good build up. I love the characters and how more depth is given to them, as the story goes. Please finish it....pretty please....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
pease finish

I Just started reading your story.And I can't wait for you to start writing again.

Are you alright? Well I Hope you are . PLEASE FINISH

LovesAGoodStoryLovesAGoodStoryalmost 12 years ago
COMPLETE THE DAMN STORY!

The title of my comment says all

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
please,please pretty please!

Hi I know that d story is kinda old and any number of things coulda happen but if u can please complete d series. I'm dying to finish it!! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
i love this story

I love this story its really good and im just dyin to know what happens next please finish it

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

PLEASE write more, it's driving me crazy to not know what's gonna happen...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please! Next!

I love your story! Please tell me what is next? Did she wakes up? Please!

stephlambert31stephlambert31about 10 years ago
More please!

I truly hope you aregoing to finish this story, I'm dying to know what happens!!!!

firerose78firerose78over 9 years ago
helloooo

I have enjoyed reading this story. I hope that you will finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
the best

I really hope you finish this. It was such an amazing story can't wait to read more!!!

CalaharaCalaharaalmost 9 years ago
more??

Hope there is more coming soon I am really enjoying the story.

realist7realist7over 8 years ago
Story

Sadly this story was written in 2009 chapter 12 in Aug 2009.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Need to write more. Please. This is such a great story. I couldn't put it down.

mecarelionmecarelionabout 2 years ago

I so wish there was more

I guess this is the downside of reading older stories

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