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Between the Lines

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by bobsgirl08/31/09

OMG. Seriously, OMG.

*ahem* Well. Well, well, well. What the heck took you so long? I think my circuits shorted out. Oh my, this is a good one. So, uh, Minxie, where is this bookstore?

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by sirhugs09/01/09

gave me shivers

wished it was longer...

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by fire_breeze11/03/09

Wow.

Simply delicious.

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by Scotsman6911/03/09

lovely

It was me.

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by LindsayRae01/04/11

Beautiful

Great to see you writing again, Minxy!

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by 03/16/11

Awesome and short

I love quickies
Great job

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by fire_breeze10/12/11

Wow... short, to be point... exactly as in the story. It left me breathless.

Now I'm off to read your other stories!

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by Zephreck08/03/12

Lovely read...

Was lovely. I love the setting and the whole fantasy. Makes me and probably every other male that reads it want to be the guy in the story for sure.

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by Tio_Narratore08/15/12

A perfectly brief tale of a perfectly brief encounter.

A very nice play on the anonymous partner, a short tale to match what had to be a brief encounter. The public nature of it isn't lost as the protagonist looses thought of it. And a nice touch of almost uncovering the mystery at the end. Thanks for an enjoyable read...

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by Anonymous03/19/13

A Very Good Read

BUT don't turn into a naughty wife when you return for more brousing.

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by texasace11/27/13

I would LUV to know more about you.....

You have a great talent for writing hot, stimulating stories... keep it up!! Ace

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by Randolph09/22/14

Just..

... So good. So many hot elements here.. I enjoyed very much x

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by darkknight0109/22/14

Great find at the book store

What an excellent sexy story. I wonder how quickly will she make it back to the book store.

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by Anonymous01/30/15

Yes

"I want to watch you play with your pussy while you suck my cock." He stared down into her eyes, his hand still tight in her hair. "I want you to cum with me babygirl."

His hand tightened in her hair. "Open."

Nice read.
Heartless

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by HornyProf02/08/15

very sexy story! love the interplay between the book and the bookstore happenings

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by visioneer03/08/15

Flash erotica at its best. Nice writing.

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