All Comments on 'Between the Lines'

*ahem* Well. Well, well, well. What the heck took you so long? I think my circuits shorted out. Oh my, this is a good one. So, uh, Minxie, where is this bookstore?

wished it was longer...

Simply delicious.

It was me.

Great to see you writing again, Minxy!

I love quickies

Great job

Wow... short, to be point... exactly as in the story. It left me breathless.

Now I'm off to read your other stories!

Was lovely. I love the setting and the whole fantasy. Makes me and probably every other male that reads it want to be the guy in the story for sure.

A very nice play on the anonymous partner, a short tale to match what had to be a brief encounter. The public nature of it isn't lost as the protagonist looses thought of it. And a nice touch of almost uncovering the mystery at the end. Thanks for an enjoyable read...

BUT don't turn into a naughty wife when you return for more brousing.

You have a great talent for writing hot, stimulating stories... keep it up!! Ace

... So good. So many hot elements here.. I enjoyed very much x

What an excellent sexy story. I wonder how quickly will she make it back to the book store.

"I want to watch you play with your pussy while you suck my cock." He stared down into her eyes, his hand still tight in her hair. "I want you to cum with me babygirl."

His hand tightened in her hair. "Open."

Nice read.

Heartless

very sexy story! love the interplay between the book and the bookstore happenings

Flash erotica at its best. Nice writing.

Short, but got me hard as a rock. There's a romance in here somewhere.

Short and sweet. Nicely done :-)

That's all. Zach.

Some moments well-depicted hint at a much longer tale, but that doesn't mean it should be written. An exquisite little mystery such as this offering, from someone who actually knows language and people, says what she wants it to say, and that is enough. So I look at a woman in a bookstore, in a church, at a ballgame, in a picture, and wonder: would she be interested? What would be her response? One wishes such things in ordinary life because they remove the complications of social mores, and in this story we all get a bit of that fantasy. It's only one thing, and for a fantasy, that's enough.

Readers want more; that's so much better than wanting less.

So intense after being drawn in! Complete with promise to cum again!

I rarely see short pieces get a high rating. Well written and edited. Would that it was this easy to find a lover.