I love this story & I hope you will continue with it.
Hot story but cruel
I love this story, you have to continue writing this story. It needs a second chapter at least.
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Great story
I love this story & I hope you will continue with it.
Thats kinda cruel
Hot story but cruel
More!!!
I love this story, you have to continue writing this story. It needs a second chapter at least.
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