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Very Original!
This was not at all what I was expecting, and I loved it even more for that. Great characters and good job keeping the pace up throughout the story.
Very Good!
This is a unique story with a compelling plot. I can't wait to see where this one goes.
Not My Usual Genre
Sill it was a great read. Well written and a lot of fun. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Major Cajones
HOT writing two
Great; tense, fast, interesting characters and plot. I'd like to see more of this tail ;) ! meanwhile I'm reading more of your stories !
Imagination!
That's what I like, imagination with sex, heaven and hell and a beautiful woman! awesome story!
Hot story X 2
Enjoyed the twists and turns. I was fighting the devil right along with Dan and Angelic with one hand while scrolling with the other. Sorry the story ended when it did but it'll be a while before I can help them banish another devil :)
Love the sex=magic angle
An awesome way to combat evil: I'm down with that! A great story by a imaginative writer- thanks for sharing!
Not read any SiFi
But, glad of this introduction.
If any other writer can produce similar imaginative stories, then I'm hooked.
Great satire....
A very good read... you really have a gift for writing. Keep up the Great work!
Excellent
Great story :) - hope you'll continue this. Would really like to hear of their continued adventures . ..
Great imagination!
What a great story, a five star fantasy in my book. Great visual descriptions and a few nice twists!
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