even though it is a fantasy... If it were me I would say thanks but no thanks to Kirby and tell Carol that I no longer wanted to share her and to keep her legs together until I get home.. Interesting problem that comes up here is why kick Carol out if shes is useful and does not cause other problems about town, honor before comfort and pleasure?
by
Anonymous08/30/09
Zero points for being authored by JPB
The sad thing is you're old enough that your organs won't really be of any use for transplant, so you're an actual, factual worthless human being.
by
Anonymous08/30/09
;oyb h
c 4;5 b
by
Anonymous08/30/09
Don`t know
Bob, you are a good story teller but, this storyust plain sucks--you are losing it Bob--wake up Bob.
by
Anonymous08/30/09
His attitude change doesn't make sense
When he finds out she was planning to get pregnant, that's when he started having feelings for her. Why? The idea that she was doing this out of love for him is utter bullshit. It's a controlling factor and nothing else. It was apparent she was using both men and has no feelings for either of them.
that this a really intriguing story and I really want to know the outcome.Ignore the moronic comments that you seem to attract.One of the reasons they are that way out is because you insist on using words with more than four letters in them and it hurts their brain cell too much.
by
Anonymous08/30/09
started good
with ch 1 and for a good part in ch 2, but the end of this chapter is really disappointing. how can he buy what she says and just arrange his thinking they way she wants it. hey she did not brainwash him with drugs, why doesn't he do his own thining?
by
Anonymous08/30/09
Why do readers
bother to read an author they don't like, no matter what he writes? Just to make nasty remarks? Grow up, or go away.Also it amazes me how some readers challenge the authors intend. Read what he wrote, not what you think he should have written. Amazing.Good entertaining story JPB, nice ending, had to smile at that one. Thanks.ML
Now you know why I took umbrage with the scum and fought like I did. I liked JPB's story too. I'll mark it on content and effort. I don't care about a writer's views on things, just if he puts forth a good effort, like Bob has done. Too bad we have to put up with the troll scum and live with their comments and zeroes. I'll vote high on a story, even if I haven't read it, just to offset the scum votes. LanceGT
TO those who do not like JPB stories please spare yourself and us your pain. Just do not read them! This story is about an open marriage involving rational human beings who are honest and respect each other. Their marraige is more stable and loving than the marriage of Kirby and Nick. I just loved the ending when Rob finds out that Carol is pregnant that he drop everything including Kirby to get back to Carol. Great story - Thanks!
by
Anonymous08/31/09
average JPB story
which is not a whole lot of sex, or character development, or major conflict, or any interesting things outside of his universe of cuckoldry where the husband's either loving it or bitching about it,,,
by
Anonymous08/31/09
This is bad on so many levels and ways
I will have to assume all of these characters were crack babies and totally mentally defective. The only one I understand is Kirby, she is mentally ill. Most abused women are, and if they get rid of the abuser they just go out and find another one. Our main character here is just as mentally ill. The abuser is his wife and she relishes in the fact he is a wimp, a cuck, and a sub. She has him trained and pussy whipped to beat the band. That is why he identifies with Kirby, they are dopelgangers. I really feel sad that these mentally challenged (sickos) are having a child, one more with special needs for special education.
by
Anonymous08/31/09
Sleepless needs to get some sleep.
One spouse fucking around on another spouse is not an open marriage, it is betrayal, cheating, and adultry. And not to like this type of scenario doesnt make you a hater, in fact liking this story may in its own way make you a hater. A hater of men, a hater of wives, a hater of husbands, a hater of marriage, and most of all you are guilty of discrimination in feeling that your opinion is actually worth more than anyone else reading stories here.
by
Anonymous08/31/09
Bob Bob Bob
It didn't take long to jump the old cockold fence, open marriage, slut wife, slut hubbie and all the rest. These two having kids isn't a good idea, it will turn out as twisted as you.
She is a cheap house keeper and a good fuck when in town, so why get rid of her. As long she is paying her way he doesn't have a thing to gripe about. She is always there for him anytime he wants her. The only thing I would want to know for sure is that who really is the father of her baby.
by
Anonymous08/31/09
yawn....
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
by
Anonymous08/31/09
Vitriolic Readers.
I don't know why some readers bother. This story is just that - a story! Some readers hurl abuse at the characters in a story. They may not identify with a character but as long as the story is well written and avoids too many typos (and the author knows the difference between there, they're and their and other easily avoided slips) it should be judged on its merits as a story. It is often like people thinking actors ARE their characters. Give us all a break and limit your comments a balanced view as to how well the author has engaged us and not rant about weak, strong or indifferent characters. Keep up the good, erotic STORIES Bob!
by
Anonymous09/02/09
why be married?....
....other than to serve as foils in an aggravating tale-pistolpackinpete
by
Anonymous12/11/09
check paternity
he doesn't even need her as housekeeper, etc; where just let her go. The accomodation ran its course and why be a meal ticket any longer? kirby is probably available on permanent basis.
I really enjoy this story (this is probably my third reading). It has more unexpected twists and turns than most JPB stories, as well as some warmth and even a happy (though strange) ending.
For us JPB fans, this is right up there near the top! And for those of you who don't like his stories---uh, perhaps you could stop reading them and then complaining about them!
Things aren't always easy in a relationship, and if I had seen what he had seen and heard what he had heard, I would have been pretty tempted to go the routes he did (Though I probably would have divorced her when I discovered things. But it would not have been as easy a decision as everyone makes it out to be)
This story had complex characters, inconvienient emotional attachments, assholes, pathos.
I had to deduct 2 stars because of the big cock nonsense. First, there are no 10 inch cocks on humans. Even John Holmes (1 in millions) was only 8.75 inches. Second, women are not interested in big cocks. Only men are interested in big cocks. After, they have babies, women might prefer thicker cocks but not longer than average. An excited vagina is only 4 inches and while it will easily stretch 150 to 175 percent, additional stretching would be painful.
Finally, humans have evolved so that normal size is best. If women actually preferred longer than aveage cocks, prior to modern birth control, men with longer cocks would have produce more babies. Even a 5 percent advantage per generation would be huge after a couple dozen generations. That would result in larger cocks being the norm.
This is a rebuttal to DWornock's silly assertions concerning the physical size of a man's baby making tool.
According to the best statistical information available the mean length of the average man's erect penis is 5 inches (Results vary slightly from study to study, but 5 inches is the mean average).
However, where records are concerned, there have been many men who have had truly remarkable sized members. For instance, Jonah Falcon has a proven length of 13.5 inches. Meaning he has one of the biggest cock ever recorded (someone else, around the turn of the century, was recorded to have one just as long). It doesn't mean there are not men out there with cocks between 8 and 10 inches running around. As I'm sure there are quite a few.
And, I don't necessarily trust supposedly unbiased researchers' data when their own sense of masculinity is at stake.
Anyway, I don't understand why anyone would operate from false and erroneous information (or more likely, made up info) just to justify a low score.
As for John C. Holmes, no one really knows the actual length of his oft shown member. Holmeses ex-wife claimed it was 10 inches, while others say Holmes stated it was 15 inches.
I'm not a connoisseur of men's dangly things, but what was so assuredly stated in the comments had me wondering and a few minutes with Google and...
I didn't bother with the rest of the claims.
I was going to add a critique of JPB's story, but I'll do it another time, when I have a chance to reread the story.
Okay, I reread the story. The writing as usual, is good. On the other hand, the storyline sucks. I'm just not a fan of cheating spouses and doubly so of cheating couples. I understand that the open marriage life style is a reality, but like a hallucinogenic drug, one doesn't have to partake of it to know what harm it'll do.
I rated the story a 5 because of the writing skills of the author, even if I don't like what he's used them for in this instance.
Well, looks like, in my opinion, They defiantly have an open marriage right up until he gets the other guys job because Kirby will go back to her husband. Some women are like that, right up until the time the abusive husband kills them. and so it goes.
Every character is a loser in this depressing tale of idiots. Irrational or just plain stupid, I don't know. Either way it doesn't matter the result is the same, messed up lives of people with the emotional depth of a dirty puddle.
by
Anonymous08/04/14
Here's a POLL
Who wants to kick this MOTHER FUCKER (JPB) out of Lit?
Put in title - POLL
Give your vote in the comment section - Yes or No
by
Anonymous08/04/14
POLL
Yes
by
Anonymous09/27/14
Yuck
Just what every man wants in life. Half a wife, with the other half getting pounded by a bigger cock while she lives with him.
Just fucking yuck. I'll take a willing cuckold that slurps the cum from his wife because they went into it together over this shit.
Only half of JPB's shit is worth reading but, it's my choice which stories I'll read. The other half of his shit is mostly well written, has a plot that's interesting and I like reading them.
So POLL...NO! My choice is he stays even if he is an asshole at times.
Now, a poll on removing Anonymous.... or perhaps, more to the point, expiring anonymous comments... give them 6 months, and then automatically erase them.
Why is it that none of these cunts have a dildo? Do they always have to find cock? Plastic and d cells would curb the drama.
by
Anonymous10/04/15
why
Why is it that none of these stories have an ending?
by
Anonymous11/08/15
Rob is now on the list of JPB's all-time dumbest men
Why would he believe Carol for a second? She's a big cock slut. She always will be and if Rob doesn't know, I mean 100% positively know, that she's back to fucking Jason or another big cock the minute he's out the door then his IQ is that of a rock. And why the hell doesn't this have another chapter? The story sure isn't done.
by
Anonymous04/03/16
Good stuff!!!!
Always enjoy your stories.......keep up the good work.
English
Crap
JPB back at the stand
Thanks
A great story JPB Thanks for the entertainment It does make one wonder what will he do now. Mike from Texas
Loved it
Clever story. Thanks
Very enjoyable tale
even though it is a fantasy... If it were me I would say thanks but no thanks to Kirby and tell Carol that I no longer wanted to share her and to keep her legs together until I get home.. Interesting problem that comes up here is why kick Carol out if shes is useful and does not cause other problems about town, honor before comfort and pleasure?
Zero points for being authored by JPB
The sad thing is you're old enough that your organs won't really be of any use for transplant, so you're an actual, factual worthless human being.
;oyb h
c 4;5 b
Don`t know
Bob, you are a good story teller but, this storyust plain sucks--you are losing it Bob--wake up Bob.
His attitude change doesn't make sense
When he finds out she was planning to get pregnant, that's when he started having feelings for her. Why? The idea that she was doing this out of love for him is utter bullshit. It's a controlling factor and nothing else. It was apparent she was using both men and has no feelings for either of them.
Great one Bob
Loved the ending, really funny!
I think
that this a really intriguing story and I really want to know the outcome.Ignore the moronic comments that you seem to attract.One of the reasons they are that way out is because you insist on using words with more than four letters in them and it hurts their brain cell too much.
started good
with ch 1 and for a good part in ch 2, but the end of this chapter is really disappointing. how can he buy what she says and just arrange his thinking they way she wants it. hey she did not brainwash him with drugs, why doesn't he do his own thining?
Why do readers
bother to read an author they don't like, no matter what he writes? Just to make nasty remarks? Grow up, or go away.Also it amazes me how some readers challenge the authors intend. Read what he wrote, not what you think he should have written. Amazing.Good entertaining story JPB, nice ending, had to smile at that one. Thanks.ML
Very enjoyable story
The guys who hate JPB stories and score the story based on hate rather than the merit of the story are simply scum. Their comments are worthless.
Couldn't agree with you more Lance
Now you know why I took umbrage with the scum and fought like I did. I liked JPB's story too. I'll mark it on content and effort. I don't care about a writer's views on things, just if he puts forth a good effort, like Bob has done. Too bad we have to put up with the troll scum and live with their comments and zeroes. I'll vote high on a story, even if I haven't read it, just to offset the scum votes. LanceGT
Say No to the Haters!
TO those who do not like JPB stories please spare yourself and us your pain. Just do not read them! This story is about an open marriage involving rational human beings who are honest and respect each other. Their marraige is more stable and loving than the marriage of Kirby and Nick. I just loved the ending when Rob finds out that Carol is pregnant that he drop everything including Kirby to get back to Carol. Great story - Thanks!
average JPB story
which is not a whole lot of sex, or character development, or major conflict, or any interesting things outside of his universe of cuckoldry where the husband's either loving it or bitching about it,,,
This is bad on so many levels and ways
I will have to assume all of these characters were crack babies and totally mentally defective. The only one I understand is Kirby, she is mentally ill. Most abused women are, and if they get rid of the abuser they just go out and find another one. Our main character here is just as mentally ill. The abuser is his wife and she relishes in the fact he is a wimp, a cuck, and a sub. She has him trained and pussy whipped to beat the band. That is why he identifies with Kirby, they are dopelgangers. I really feel sad that these mentally challenged (sickos) are having a child, one more with special needs for special education.
Sleepless needs to get some sleep.
One spouse fucking around on another spouse is not an open marriage, it is betrayal, cheating, and adultry. And not to like this type of scenario doesnt make you a hater, in fact liking this story may in its own way make you a hater. A hater of men, a hater of wives, a hater of husbands, a hater of marriage, and most of all you are guilty of discrimination in feeling that your opinion is actually worth more than anyone else reading stories here.
Bob Bob Bob
It didn't take long to jump the old cockold fence, open marriage, slut wife, slut hubbie and all the rest. These two having kids isn't a good idea, it will turn out as twisted as you.
I agree with Rob
She is a cheap house keeper and a good fuck when in town, so why get rid of her. As long she is paying her way he doesn't have a thing to gripe about. She is always there for him anytime he wants her. The only thing I would want to know for sure is that who really is the father of her baby.
yawn....
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Vitriolic Readers.
I don't know why some readers bother. This story is just that - a story! Some readers hurl abuse at the characters in a story. They may not identify with a character but as long as the story is well written and avoids too many typos (and the author knows the difference between there, they're and their and other easily avoided slips) it should be judged on its merits as a story. It is often like people thinking actors ARE their characters. Give us all a break and limit your comments a balanced view as to how well the author has engaged us and not rant about weak, strong or indifferent characters. Keep up the good, erotic STORIES Bob!
why be married?....
....other than to serve as foils in an aggravating tale-pistolpackinpete
check paternity
he doesn't even need her as housekeeper, etc; where just let her go. The accomodation ran its course and why be a meal ticket any longer? kirby is probably available on permanent basis.
One of JPB's best!
I really enjoy this story (this is probably my third reading). It has more unexpected twists and turns than most JPB stories, as well as some warmth and even a happy (though strange) ending.
For us JPB fans, this is right up there near the top! And for those of you who don't like his stories---uh, perhaps you could stop reading them and then complaining about them!
ohio
This story ROCKED!
Things aren't always easy in a relationship, and if I had seen what he had seen and heard what he had heard, I would have been pretty tempted to go the routes he did (Though I probably would have divorced her when I discovered things. But it would not have been as easy a decision as everyone makes it out to be)
This story had complex characters, inconvienient emotional attachments, assholes, pathos.
I liked it a lot.
Reread it
It's just as good the second time. Consider it favorited.
I couldn't rate this chapter 5 stars.
I had to deduct 2 stars because of the big cock nonsense. First, there are no 10 inch cocks on humans. Even John Holmes (1 in millions) was only 8.75 inches. Second, women are not interested in big cocks. Only men are interested in big cocks. After, they have babies, women might prefer thicker cocks but not longer than average. An excited vagina is only 4 inches and while it will easily stretch 150 to 175 percent, additional stretching would be painful.
Finally, humans have evolved so that normal size is best. If women actually preferred longer than aveage cocks, prior to modern birth control, men with longer cocks would have produce more babies. Even a 5 percent advantage per generation would be huge after a couple dozen generations. That would result in larger cocks being the norm.
The Lies of Size
This is a rebuttal to DWornock's silly assertions concerning the physical size of a man's baby making tool.
According to the best statistical information available the mean length of the average man's erect penis is 5 inches (Results vary slightly from study to study, but 5 inches is the mean average).
However, where records are concerned, there have been many men who have had truly remarkable sized members. For instance, Jonah Falcon has a proven length of 13.5 inches. Meaning he has one of the biggest cock ever recorded (someone else, around the turn of the century, was recorded to have one just as long). It doesn't mean there are not men out there with cocks between 8 and 10 inches running around. As I'm sure there are quite a few.
And, I don't necessarily trust supposedly unbiased researchers' data when their own sense of masculinity is at stake.
Anyway, I don't understand why anyone would operate from false and erroneous information (or more likely, made up info) just to justify a low score.
As for John C. Holmes, no one really knows the actual length of his oft shown member. Holmeses ex-wife claimed it was 10 inches, while others say Holmes stated it was 15 inches.
I'm not a connoisseur of men's dangly things, but what was so assuredly stated in the comments had me wondering and a few minutes with Google and...
I didn't bother with the rest of the claims.
I was going to add a critique of JPB's story, but I'll do it another time, when I have a chance to reread the story.
Fine Writing
Okay, I reread the story. The writing as usual, is good. On the other hand, the storyline sucks. I'm just not a fan of cheating spouses and doubly so of cheating couples. I understand that the open marriage life style is a reality, but like a hallucinogenic drug, one doesn't have to partake of it to know what harm it'll do.
I rated the story a 5 because of the writing skills of the author, even if I don't like what he's used them for in this instance.
Enjoyed it
But that is one fucked up group of people.
Get DNA on the baby.
And dump his cheating wife regardless. That's my best advice.
Well, looks like, in my opinion, They defiantly have an open marriage right up until he gets the other guys job because Kirby will go back to her husband. Some women are like that, right up until the time the abusive husband kills them. and so it goes.
Depressing
Every character is a loser in this depressing tale of idiots. Irrational or just plain stupid, I don't know. Either way it doesn't matter the result is the same, messed up lives of people with the emotional depth of a dirty puddle.
Here's a POLL
Who wants to kick this MOTHER FUCKER (JPB) out of Lit?
Put in title - POLL
Give your vote in the comment section - Yes or No
POLL
Yes
Yuck
Just what every man wants in life. Half a wife, with the other half getting pounded by a bigger cock while she lives with him.
Just fucking yuck. I'll take a willing cuckold that slurps the cum from his wife because they went into it together over this shit.
POLL--NO
Only half of JPB's shit is worth reading but, it's my choice which stories I'll read. The other half of his shit is mostly well written, has a plot that's interesting and I like reading them.
So POLL...NO! My choice is he stays even if he is an asshole at times.
Poll? what a maroon...
Now, a poll on removing Anonymous.... or perhaps, more to the point, expiring anonymous comments... give them 6 months, and then automatically erase them.
That would be nice.
Green-something
Thanks***
For the read.
why
Why is it that none of these cunts have a dildo? Do they always have to find cock? Plastic and d cells would curb the drama.
why
Why is it that none of these stories have an ending?
Rob is now on the list of JPB's all-time dumbest men
Why would he believe Carol for a second? She's a big cock slut. She always will be and if Rob doesn't know, I mean 100% positively know, that she's back to fucking Jason or another big cock the minute he's out the door then his IQ is that of a rock. And why the hell doesn't this have another chapter? The story sure isn't done.
Good stuff!!!!
Always enjoy your stories.......keep up the good work.
Carol vs Kirby
It is NOT the same!
Carol may be using Jason because she's lonely, but Kirby is using Rob because Nick was cheating!
Dude
The second she went on about his big cock he should have ruined her
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