by sarahloveitt
Hot, steamy, loving and juicy! Hoping my first bi will be equally lovely!
You really have a gift. I'm assuming this is from a real situation, as you say. But if you have created this from your imagination, it was done brilliantly. So real and passionate. I love your pacing. Nothing beats a slow buildup in erotic writing. Thanks for the intense pleasure.
I agree fully with the first two comments; very realistic, very passionate, very thrilling for the participants. "...one of the loveliest wonders of the natural world" indeed.
A very beautiful piece of erotic writing! Thank you for the pleasure it has given me.