I liked it a lot... good build up and perfect finish. I can see the theme where he will be knocking at the girls' doors too so that intrigues me. Whether the mom joins in or not is up to you but so far... so GOOD.
by
Anonymous08/31/09
Oh yeah
I do believe that we should have mom and daughters at a Pool party. Damn; don't stop now!
English
excellent
I liked it a lot... good build up and perfect finish. I can see the theme where he will be knocking at the girls' doors too so that intrigues me. Whether the mom joins in or not is up to you but so far... so GOOD.
Oh yeah
I do believe that we should have mom and daughters at a Pool party. Damn; don't stop now!
daughters
please, take ALL ASSES!
really
good
I liked your story just wish there were more
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to The Neighbors or
More submissions by cuninglinguist61.