All Comments on 'Sis-in-law Incentives Ch. 04'

This so great, SO HOT. Youve got loads more to go. Dont end it. At least 10-20 more chapters, PLEASE.

I was expecting his wife to be one of the 4. She has to know whats going on...younger sister, husband. the sisters get along....hopefully she will be introduced later??

On weight training. He was loosing body fat - BMI - and increasing in size, so the weight goal was not really reasonable measure of loss. He needs to get his body fat measure properly. In fact, he could injure himself seriously by over dieting while weight training and excercising. I know it ruins the plot value of your "incentives" idea, but in fact the incentives need to be tied to a reasonable program of loss and gain.

@Simple49er

- I'm glad you read the story and took the time to comment. It's appreciated. You've hit on his problem exactly. When the rules were made, the change in body mass wasn't accounted for. His effort to lose the weight becomes more difficult, and he ends up having to do less mass building, more strength and conditioning, and a whole lot more cardio to cut down the fat.

@hmmm - Anonymous

- The wife is in the background - don't worry she'll make an appearance in a big way.

@Eric

- there are at least 8 more chapters left, and none are as short as this one. I'll try to complete the final edit on each one and roll them out every 4-5 days.

I think he should go for the punishment, if he can hold up and not die from being fucked to death. Best chapter yet. It's going to be hard to top this one. Thanks for the good writing and sexy as hell story.....Rich

555 or 931 ?

And you're begging again :-(

Twat !

I really enjoyed reading this story. I used to write stories for children and expected somebody's comments about what I had written cause it could motivate me. I really appreciate your hard work to write this story. Keep up the good stories rolling.

Best wishes from Indonesia

wasn't sure what was meant by 931-9293, he got the number right afterwards, with the number starting with 555 both before, when whispered to him, and afterwards when he recollects Julie's number.

Seems like an error.

931-9293 should have been 555-9293

This is unrealistic bullshit!

Jenny actually broke all trust Alex had at this point. Non-consensual, if this happened to a woman it would be deemed rape (double standards?), exposure to STD, the list goes on.

You cannot trust her anymore

Love this series.

Hot scene!

Yeah, that's a no from me. Don't get me wrong, the story is good, and most of the scenes are hot, but this was way too far, especially for something like missing a goal in weight loss.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Very erotic scenario in this chapter.

I was really enjoying the story until now!!!!! I HATE when any writer brings into play DOM!!! So I am done reading!!!!

Fanfuckingtastic!