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Notes From The Underground

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by Equality209/14/09

Congratulations

Well done. I look forward to many nights of pleasure reading your long novel.

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by Anonymous06/15/13

Damn

So thought it would end better for slaves. K5 would take up the struggle. Revealing what had happened - including crime not taking girls to public humiliation. Echo, prudence, Alex, Laura, India convicted and diapered. Katrina for forcing incest. Zax turned over to the children who free everyone.

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