All Comments on 'Back From Iraq Ch. 03'

Another ch. well done. The urgency for eachother was well put. You're not giving them a crazed mananical personality lost in unmeaningful fucking. It still deals with the sister still feeling that it's all right yet at the same time, she still has boundries. This I'm sure will be dealt with in future chapters. It had a flow to it that made me appreciate it alot more; it didn't carry on and on, page after page as some authors feel they should. I look forward to your next chapter.

It's a shame he didn't get to fuck his sister, slide his big cock deep into her pussy,fill her up with his hot sperm.Thanks for the good chapter.....Rich