A Lover of Music

Charming story

With some judicial editing you could submit this to a magazine such as People's Friend. I suggest you read it out loud to yourself so the slightly clumsy phrases can be ironed out e.g."He so used to enjoy her playing" You don't need the so. Be careful about pronouns, towards the end of the piece you call the cat "he" in one sentence and then refer to him as "it" in the next two. Good luck with your writing.