Its not exactly the kind of stories I like but I do think its well written. If it were a black woman and a white man I would have been a bit more interested. For someone to use the N word is crazy though. I'm a black woman and although this isn't my cup of tea I'm not rude about it. I say keep writing and screw the negativity.
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Anonymous09/09/09
Enjoyable story
I really enjoyed this story. The premise is straightforward, but the detail and writing you employ is far above average. Please write more like this!
Isn't Bill even going to try to help Elise? Tsk... What a pathetic little wimp. If I were Elise, I'd slap Bill's balls until they matched my purple dress.
English
Erotic
Hot story, hope to see a part 2 soon. A wife seduced by a confident hung stud in front of the husband make the hottest stories.
What
A typical piece of nigger shit, stupid little boy story.
Not my cup of tea
Its not exactly the kind of stories I like but I do think its well written. If it were a black woman and a white man I would have been a bit more interested. For someone to use the N word is crazy though. I'm a black woman and although this isn't my cup of tea I'm not rude about it. I say keep writing and screw the negativity.
Enjoyable story
I really enjoyed this story. The premise is straightforward, but the detail and writing you employ is far above average. Please write more like this!
"Yes, sir"?
Isn't Bill even going to try to help Elise? Tsk... What a pathetic little wimp. If I were Elise, I'd slap Bill's balls until they matched my purple dress.
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