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Anonymousover 14 years ago

Well!! You can't leave it there.....!!

What does Steve do now?<br>How does Gwen react (does she even get away) once the immediate passion has gone?<br>What was she THINKING!?<br>Does this mean Gabby is in with a chance with Steve?

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