for your first effort. Enjoyed your story but would have liked more description of the sex. Give us another entry soon.
i thought it was pretty good..went kind of fast to me but good reading overall
into a mentally ill family!!! LOL!
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Not bad . . .
for your first effort. Enjoyed your story but would have liked more description of the sex. Give us another entry soon.
good
i thought it was pretty good..went kind of fast to me but good reading overall
nice foray
into a mentally ill family!!! LOL!
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