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by vrosej10

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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 14 years ago
^

I think there is a really good poem somewhere in here, but right now that poem is smothered in unnecessary words.

Sapphos SisterSapphos Sisterover 14 years ago
Very atmospheric

I can see the traveller. I love the sense of inevitability that you convey.

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