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Maybel-line Ch. 05

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by marklion09/04/09

Great Chapter!!!

Manny you wrote another great Chapter about Mabel and her boyfriend. I like how you develop the story line and how he was able to deal with her exhibitionist tendencies. The way you wrote this chapter teams like the series is ended is that true?

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Pleasent Surprising Out of Box Story Many Feathers

It Got me Curious after reading the first stall and the story is Nice.I am disappointed that you dint write any Affectionate/Love telling Scenes between james and May ...

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