although i like your revenge stories, it is refreshing to read redemption tales as well. nobody is perfect, and in marriage lack of communiction is a killer. gld to see you allowed them to work it out. thanks for the story and welcome back.
csdII
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Anonymous09/04/09
What's up? Isn't this a duplicate?
I read every story from you. I always enjoy your stories. However, isn't this an exact duplicate of part 3 of the already existing slut couple story - labeled 1 Martin, 2 Jennie, 3 Martin a? All you did was change Jen to Jean.
I did read all 3 originals again and enjoyed them.
I know I have read at least two previous stories with the characters but I did not remember reading the ending.
Lots of fun!
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Anonymous09/05/09
Sweet tale but....
....I wonder how many other lives are predicated on half-truths?Could she really love him and fuck another in their bed? Can one loving husband truly satisfy her inner slut?-pistolpackinpete
I am just curious, why the reprint. There does not seem to be much of a change from the other version. I liked this series, so it was fun to read again at the silliness that people can get themselves into. At least all your character are disfunctional but seem happy in the end.
Unlike a lot of your stories, infidelity doesn't happen in a vacuum. There is a motive. In quite a few of your stories, the motive is weak (believe me, you are nowhere near the worst offender on this point!) Not so this one! People fall in and out of love during a marriage. I've experienced it and so has anyone who'se been married.
So these came across as real people.
Thinking about this story now, I do have one complaint. Martin never had any second thoughts. He never had any remorse. Unless he were an arrogant asshole like Frank, he would have. And since unfortunately, you didn't paint him that way. He was worried about satisfying Angela and doing the job properly. He expressed that getting prepared for sex took more then a pair of bare nipples. He even helped with a reconciliation between the two women. So where was the remorse or second guessing?
The reconcilliation raises another point: it seemed too easy. After decades of this bitterness, it was over like that? Granted, chicks can be different (I am reminded of the scenes in Ruthless People and Death Becomes Her, where women SOMETIMES can reverse course like that. It must be based on something)
Please note that these comments aside, I rated it highly!
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thanks big guy!
although i like your revenge stories, it is refreshing to read redemption tales as well. nobody is perfect, and in marriage lack of communiction is a killer. gld to see you allowed them to work it out. thanks for the story and welcome back.
csdII
What's up? Isn't this a duplicate?
I read every story from you. I always enjoy your stories. However, isn't this an exact duplicate of part 3 of the already existing slut couple story - labeled 1 Martin, 2 Jennie, 3 Martin a? All you did was change Jen to Jean.
I did read all 3 originals again and enjoyed them.
Well put together
I know I have read at least two previous stories with the characters but I did not remember reading the ending.
Lots of fun!
Sweet tale but....
....I wonder how many other lives are predicated on half-truths?Could she really love him and fuck another in their bed? Can one loving husband truly satisfy her inner slut?-pistolpackinpete
Why?
I am just curious, why the reprint. There does not seem to be much of a change from the other version. I liked this series, so it was fun to read again at the silliness that people can get themselves into. At least all your character are disfunctional but seem happy in the end.
I really enjoyed this one
Unlike a lot of your stories, infidelity doesn't happen in a vacuum. There is a motive. In quite a few of your stories, the motive is weak (believe me, you are nowhere near the worst offender on this point!) Not so this one! People fall in and out of love during a marriage. I've experienced it and so has anyone who'se been married.
So these came across as real people.
Thinking about this story now, I do have one complaint. Martin never had any second thoughts. He never had any remorse. Unless he were an arrogant asshole like Frank, he would have. And since unfortunately, you didn't paint him that way. He was worried about satisfying Angela and doing the job properly. He expressed that getting prepared for sex took more then a pair of bare nipples. He even helped with a reconciliation between the two women. So where was the remorse or second guessing?
The reconcilliation raises another point: it seemed too easy. After decades of this bitterness, it was over like that? Granted, chicks can be different (I am reminded of the scenes in Ruthless People and Death Becomes Her, where women SOMETIMES can reverse course like that. It must be based on something)
Please note that these comments aside, I rated it highly!
A Little Confused
Why allow comments now instead of the original posting? Just curious.
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and why the farce, TK U MLJ LV NV
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