HOW? By pimping out your wife? Well done writer you have hit on a good idea there. But I see you don't state if you are male or female. Which normally means female so this is your fantasy? When are you going to tell your husband? about you fucking someone else because your bored with him? Don't write anymore stories just stick to your own nightmares.
by
Anonymous09/12/09
This isnt swinging, this was a setup the other wif
left them alone. The other guy fucks your wife and you are now a cuckold and got nothing for it but used pussy. Hell just pimp her out and get well paid for the use of your pussy that you can no longer satisfy.
by
Anonymous09/12/09
There is something inherently problematic ...
with a marriage if it takes someone else to make the spouse feel sexy or wanted.
by
Anonymous09/12/09
Fun story ... hey this is fiction!!
What's wrong with you ass holes who commment only because you don't like the content. Get a life.
by
Anonymous09/12/09
Fun Story?
Husband had fun, where was that part, I most have missed it. I don't know where all these little cucks and sluts are coming from but I hope this is just some little fucked up fantasy, not something you really want.
by
Anonymous09/12/09
I agree,
There was no fun had by anybody except the wife who got fucked by someone else and the husband gets slopy seconds this time around, next time around it will be sloppy thirds or fourths the next time around. I guess the person from the USA has a fantasy involving his female partner getting fucked by any number of people apart from him! Just be careful of the creampies I understand they taste horrible, but I honestly don't want to know! As someone said this is going to help their marriage? How?
by
Anonymous09/12/09
I just told the story to my wife ...
We loved it!!! What more is there to say :-)
Why does the guy who doesn't like the story leave 4 comments one of them agreeing with himself and one with a score of 25 to pretend it isn't him again LOL.
She is going to be on the prowl for the rest of you life sorry sucker.
by
Anonymous09/12/09
Re:I just told the story to my wife ...
Because you stupid pathetic twat more than one person wrote those comments. The site doesn't allow more than one comment per Anonymous reader. Are you so thick you didn't realise that? Well if your wife gets off on this story and you want her to be part of the story then good luck to both of you. I just hope you don't have kids to carry on your genes.
She's at that age where she feels that she is getting older and might not be as attractive as she use to be. She is also worried that she might be stuck with the man that she is living with. She wants excitement back in her life and willing to throw her old life away to get it. Sounds like a mid-life crisis, or just a selfish bitch that wants more than her husband can give her. Good writing just the content sucks. .....Rich
This site is based on mostly fantasy with some real life stories mixed in .... For a newbie writer this is good ... now for all of the hypocrites .....back up and look in the mirror and look at what you have been reading !!!! Chill-out and learn to leave constructive comments not hypocritical diatribes .....
by
Anonymous10/19/09
Gone
The wife he knew, loved, worshipped and cherished....Gone!!!
The new wife had open marriage (a variety of lovers) on her mind for awhile and hubby just slowly put the right opportunities together for it to work, she is clever (with his consent). If you think she is satisfied that suddenly she now knows she is desirable, she is going to research the hell out of that and begin to worry about how many years before she loses the attraction so, she'll definitely begin to seek out a variety of partners...at first to convince herself tht she is till beautiful (he understands) and slowly on a regular need basis to keep her hunger sated. Date nights and then nights away and then weekends and then bringing lovers home for him to watch and participate. She's gone, she wants him to stay, makes her respectable, a roof over her head, someone to fall back on, image for their friends BUT...she is Gone!!!
by
Anonymous10/26/09
let her
slut away 'till she grows old and ugly. Try to find a better fuck.
by
Anonymous01/11/10
gee mozart, this is what you think
belongs in LOVING WIVES eh? You fucking moron!
by
Anonymous07/12/11
Well...
Of course the wimp factor is off putting to some, but more than that, there wasn't much emotion. You had the wife drunk to the point of passing our..she did pass out, so that eliminated emotion. I think it might have been a better read if she were more or less sober.
Had you given a more detailed description of the screwing, that would have given is some interest as well.
She just goes with flow and fucks a strange man? First time out?
No the bozo hubby is dumber then the dogs. She would have fucking around already just wanted to test if bozo would be a good little lap WACC puppy. Now she knows that she can do anything she wants and he wont say a word.
English
This is supposed to help your marriage?
HOW? By pimping out your wife? Well done writer you have hit on a good idea there. But I see you don't state if you are male or female. Which normally means female so this is your fantasy? When are you going to tell your husband? about you fucking someone else because your bored with him? Don't write anymore stories just stick to your own nightmares.
This isnt swinging, this was a setup the other wif
left them alone. The other guy fucks your wife and you are now a cuckold and got nothing for it but used pussy. Hell just pimp her out and get well paid for the use of your pussy that you can no longer satisfy.
There is something inherently problematic ...
with a marriage if it takes someone else to make the spouse feel sexy or wanted.
Fun story ... hey this is fiction!!
What's wrong with you ass holes who commment only because you don't like the content. Get a life.
Fun Story?
Husband had fun, where was that part, I most have missed it. I don't know where all these little cucks and sluts are coming from but I hope this is just some little fucked up fantasy, not something you really want.
I agree,
There was no fun had by anybody except the wife who got fucked by someone else and the husband gets slopy seconds this time around, next time around it will be sloppy thirds or fourths the next time around. I guess the person from the USA has a fantasy involving his female partner getting fucked by any number of people apart from him! Just be careful of the creampies I understand they taste horrible, but I honestly don't want to know! As someone said this is going to help their marriage? How?
I just told the story to my wife ...
We loved it!!! What more is there to say :-)
Why does the guy who doesn't like the story leave 4 comments one of them agreeing with himself and one with a score of 25 to pretend it isn't him again LOL.
Could you get any dumber
She is going to be on the prowl for the rest of you life sorry sucker.
Re:I just told the story to my wife ...
Because you stupid pathetic twat more than one person wrote those comments. The site doesn't allow more than one comment per Anonymous reader. Are you so thick you didn't realise that? Well if your wife gets off on this story and you want her to be part of the story then good luck to both of you. I just hope you don't have kids to carry on your genes.
another
another piece of shit writer
She was dissatisfied with him before the vacation
She's at that age where she feels that she is getting older and might not be as attractive as she use to be. She is also worried that she might be stuck with the man that she is living with. She wants excitement back in her life and willing to throw her old life away to get it. Sounds like a mid-life crisis, or just a selfish bitch that wants more than her husband can give her. Good writing just the content sucks. .....Rich
Yep, another incest relative of bt or www
OMG, this is such a pile of dog shit.
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Ok what is with all of the flak?
This site is based on mostly fantasy with some real life stories mixed in .... For a newbie writer this is good ... now for all of the hypocrites .....back up and look in the mirror and look at what you have been reading !!!! Chill-out and learn to leave constructive comments not hypocritical diatribes .....
Gone
The wife he knew, loved, worshipped and cherished....Gone!!!
The new wife had open marriage (a variety of lovers) on her mind for awhile and hubby just slowly put the right opportunities together for it to work, she is clever (with his consent). If you think she is satisfied that suddenly she now knows she is desirable, she is going to research the hell out of that and begin to worry about how many years before she loses the attraction so, she'll definitely begin to seek out a variety of partners...at first to convince herself tht she is till beautiful (he understands) and slowly on a regular need basis to keep her hunger sated. Date nights and then nights away and then weekends and then bringing lovers home for him to watch and participate. She's gone, she wants him to stay, makes her respectable, a roof over her head, someone to fall back on, image for their friends BUT...she is Gone!!!
let her
slut away 'till she grows old and ugly. Try to find a better fuck.
gee mozart, this is what you think
belongs in LOVING WIVES eh? You fucking moron!
Well...
Of course the wimp factor is off putting to some, but more than that, there wasn't much emotion. You had the wife drunk to the point of passing our..she did pass out, so that eliminated emotion. I think it might have been a better read if she were more or less sober.
Had you given a more detailed description of the screwing, that would have given is some interest as well.
However the writing was quite good
Hangover?
Bet Sweetie's hangover hurt more than her pussy!
Interesting
She just goes with flow and fucks a strange man? First time out?
No the bozo hubby is dumber then the dogs. She would have fucking around already just wanted to test if bozo would be a good little lap WACC puppy. Now she knows that she can do anything she wants and he wont say a word.
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