Excellent story! This story was very real! I felt all of the emotions that were contained within this story.
The story is intended for the reader to substitute themselves within the story. "You" is the woman and "I" is the man. This story is meant to make the reader become part of the story from a certain point of view.
It is important to rate the story for its content, not by its title. A title can always be changed but the story will always be the same.
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Anonymous09/03/09
I love it!
I love it when a man takes control. The man in this story knows actually how to do that!
English
Why "You and I"
Excellent story! This story was very real! I felt all of the emotions that were contained within this story.
The story is intended for the reader to substitute themselves within the story. "You" is the woman and "I" is the man. This story is meant to make the reader become part of the story from a certain point of view.
It is important to rate the story for its content, not by its title. A title can always be changed but the story will always be the same.
I love it!
I love it when a man takes control. The man in this story knows actually how to do that!
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