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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/03/17

Masterbation

Yeah,um... Hi!

So, as the artist of this article and "erotic story" and whatnot... Is this like your own fantasy you wrote down for other people to touch themselves to, or did you write it for yourself to masterbate to?

Also, I do have one question for you if you won't answer the others...
How many times did you touch yourself while typing this before reaching the end?

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by Anonymous03/11/17

WHERE DO THE GOOD ONES GO?

I stumbled upon this story and wish so badly it had been continued. I didn't give a damn about the errors when the story itself was so enjoyable. I would have gladly read the entire book just to learn more about these two. Does anyone know what happened to Choctaw Man? I just hate it when authors I really really like disappear. I always hope nothing awful be fell them. If anyone knows where to read more of this writers work I would love to know.

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by Anonymous07/29/17

Hot story

Don't know who the characters were, but at first, at least, I thought they were animals. Of course, I had a little difficulty with the lace panty bit! His analyzing her sexual readiness by her scent definitely is related to animals. But his growing fangs............What the fuck? It was a stud fucking a hot female. I liked it.

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by Anonymous08/02/17

Once I started reading I couldn't stop.

I really enjoyed reading your story. Stories like this are normally about the guy taking what he wants, how he wants. It was refreshing to read about a guy holding back and putting the girls needs and desires first. If only men like this really did exist! Dark desires mostly stay hidden and never explored due to fear and feeling ashamed but I think you explored this really well.

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by Anonymous11/14/17

Wow

This is werewolf right. He is a werewolf?

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by Anonymous01/26/18

Love it!

Your story’s so hot.

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by Anonymous03/09/18

Check your judgmental condemnation, already!

I am beyond annoyed by all of the comments that condemn this story as inappropriate, pass judgement on the writer or their fellow readers for enjoying the subject matter, or otherwise express distaste for the subject matter in general, but have little to nothing to say about the story and writing itself. A question to all the assholes who feel so inclined to cast their condescending bullshit upon the rest of the world by way of posting comments on an erotic fiction site- WTF ARE YOU DOING SKULKING ABOUT THE NON-CON SECTION, THEN? If you are so damn offended by the subject matter, why the hell did you even click on the link to this story or others like it? There is quite a bit of navigation involved in even reaching this category, and additional navigation to choose a story from this category. Since I can be reasonably assured that the vast majority of readers who end up here do not have anyone holding a gun to they're head, that means pretty much everyone got to this page of their own free will. If you enjoy condemning others because their kinky fantasies are different than yours, maybe you should spend your time reading short stories on a site for sheltered, hyper-moral assholes with extreme denial serious trust issues, instead. You used your free will to get here. Then you used it to read this story. Now use it to do something else- like anything but comment.

I suspect that there are some commenters here who frightened themselves a bit by spending a few minutes entertaining their deep, dark taboo fantasies, then decided to deny that they have fantasies that make them uncomfortable because they don't understand their own thoughts and desires, then decided to damn everyone else to hell in an effort to prove to themselves that they would never approve of this sort of thing. Well, be a prude if you want to, but take your criticism of what I'm into and FUCK OFF! Or get fucked. Or fuck yourself. I don't really care which, but a good hard fucking would probably loosen you up a bit and do you good.

Now, as to the real reason we should be commenting here-
Apart from a few distracting misspellings, grammatical errors or
miscellaneous problems with English usage and mechanics, I didn't find this story to be too bad at all. The writer did a good job of presenting a non-human character using only descriptive suggestions that allow the reader to draw thier own conclusions as to the creature in question. That's a complex task, and not one undertaken by many writers in this kind of venue. Many writers would have simply thrown in an awkwardly blunt statement that would force their own vision upon the reader (e.g., 'Sam was a Warewolf' or 'Max was a Satre'). The usual result tends to feel disjointed, awkward and overtly simplistic. This writer went beyond that standard, bringing a higher level of complexity and intelligence to the task of identifying the character. I find the story to be fairly well written, overall, and appropriate for the categories in question. Kudos to the author.

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by ash_leee04/13/18

Yum...

Quite a delicious story! I wish a beast would chase and ravage me...

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by Anonymous06/03/18

Amazing, just wow

PLEASE write more because i read this multiple times and came everytime. The errors dont matter except the double sentence, and i love that you didnt say what they were, that lets you create them how you want rather than leaving it at specificly a vamp or human or them being in their teens or in their thirtys. I think though in the end everyoje agrees that you should write more. Thanks for the story because i wish i was in that with my girl. Write MORE

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