Forced Pleasure

I guess if women were beasts....

...men could rape at will.This could have been filed under Non-human.Interesting perspective-pistolpackinpete

Looking forward to more

Can't wait to read more. I love it!

Very erotic

Incredibley erotic and beautifully described - i love the multiple themes in it and hope there is more from you.
Good work, Lina

Interesting

Very interesting. I really did love reading this. I do hope you will write another chapter(s). I am curious as to what will happen next with them.... and i hope she doesnt give in... 'to easily'. lol.

Very enjoyable

I really enjoyed this story as well as your other efforts. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

Interesting beginning, indeed!

Hope you will continue this story..... with many more chapters!

continue

I hope you continue writing this story. I see that you can take it many different directions. I like reluctant love stories with some adventure thrown in. Can't wait to see where you take it.

more!

i would love to read more of this. any idea when youll write more?

PLEASE

Pretty please right more for this story is really enjoyed it and wish to read more. Thanks

PLEASE!

Will you b e writing another chapther to this story??
I really enjoyed the first chapter and have been waiting if you would post another soon. Unless you are going to wait until after you are done with the moon maiden?

PLEASE

make a story out of this one!! plzz oo plzz!!!

More More More

i really liked this and i hope you continue with another chapter!

Loved it

I'd like it rougher though

You should continue with this one! It's been 2 years though so I don't think you will, sadly.

Loved it

You should continue this story. I would love to read about what happens next. You are an excellent writer.

Get an Editor:

"The realization of what just occurred hit her and she began to weep. Slowly their breathing began to turn back to normal. The realization of what just occurred hit her and she began to weep. "

One of many simple errors that detract from the story.

Please continue

This is fantastic !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

For a moment I wished to be her

Where's the rest of this story?!? So many stories here aren't finished.

This was amazing. Please write more!!

PLEASE

I BEG OF YOU WRITE MORE!

Oh my God..

I kept seeing "Forced Pleasure" in all of the similar stories sections of the stories I've been reading, finally I gave in and read it. Damn, everything about it is just so sexy, I really hope you continue.

Forced Pleasure

The story is good but there are at least 45 grammatical errors in this one story. Misspelled words, misplaced words, missing words and punctuation and even the wrong words in places.

One of the most glaring is using "site" when you should be using "sight".

A "site" is a PLACE........ a web page..... It is NOT a word to describe the wonder of a woman's body.

I had to downgrade my rating to 4 stars because of all the errors.

MORE PLEASE

Don't worry about the errors now I'm sure you will rectify this as you continue to write. My only concern is how long it will take you to finish chapters 2,3,4,5,6,7,8,etc. etc. etc. please and thank you.. I LOVE YOUR IMAGINATION, and I loved the way you excited the Hell out of me. One time was not enough xoxo.

Wow

Crazy, I really want to read more!!!

Need More

This only feels like the beginning. As someone who had made their living as an editor I noticed "errors". None of them took away from the pleasure of the tale. I only wish I hadn't read this so I could read it again for the first time.
Don't be afraid to submit to and editor for review. Any of my writing will go through that process.
Most important, keep writing.

I GUESS........

........ THIS AUTHOR SEEMS TO LEAN MORE ON THE CRUDE AMBIENCE AND STYLE IF WRITING DEPICTING CHARACTERS TO APPEAR LIKE ANIMALS. NOT EROTIC AT ALL. THIS CATEGORY SHOULD BELONG TO NON HUMAN AND RELUCTANCE.

Very very good

A swirl of emotions as I read this story. really hope for that you write a continuation....

I love this

Please tell me that there is more to this story

more?

Wish there was more after this

Great Read

You should write a series.

I was trying to rate 5 stars but accidentally hit 1. It won't let me change it. :(

Fantastic!

I really hope there's more! The only things I didn't like were the spelling/grammatical mistakes here/there that made it feel less serious. Other than that, perfect. 5 stars :) *accidentally put 4.. sorry :/ They really have to make us able to change our ratings.

wow

so beautifuly written, an amazing story !

Smokin

Hot story !! I Really liked how he gentler her but also showed her some roughness. A few spelling errors and some intimate parts were a tad rushed but I liked it. Why is there not more of this one?

Wow

deeply erotic and maybe we can get more parts. thats a 5 stars Story.

Sensual....

This was an awesome read! I enjoyed every single second!

WOW

I definitely want more. Beyond exceeded expectations. Can't stop thinking about it. MORE PLEASE!?!?

O.M.G.

PLEASE, PLEASE ME WITH THE NEXT 10 CHAPTERS!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT. I'LL TRY TO ENTERTAIN MYSELF TILL THEN, BUT REMEMBER HOW MANY OF US LOOK FOR THE NEW CHAPTERS ENDLESSLY. PLEASE FORCE MORE PLEASURE ON US TILL WE SUBMIT. XO

Good Story Needs Editing

Do a better job of editing. Learn the difference in scarred and scared. Learn the difference between pulling and pooling.

More

I agree more please

Dragon born?

Is the guy a dragon in disguise? Not that I don't like it, but he seems like a dragon

Nice!

More please.

vampire

I think he is a vampire and there should be a second chapter

Tantalizing

Longing.

Fantastic

A great mix of pain and pleasure that keeps replaying through my mind.

Exciting & Fanciful

Great Fantasy story. You MUST write more chapters!

I keep coming back and hoping there's more.. so sad it seems not to be.

More

Fabulous, please write more chapters.

Forced

A brutal rapist, a detestable creature.