like a terrific road trip-been on those west Texas roads myself...with similar ways to kill time :)
Good writing and believable. I kept expecting a truck or bus to enter the story. Could have been very good with a voyeuristic truck driver or two.
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like a terrific road trip-been on those west Texas roads myself...with similar ways to kill time :)
Not much exhibition.
Good writing and believable. I kept expecting a truck or bus to enter the story. Could have been very good with a voyeuristic truck driver or two.
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