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Perspiration

bybassbelly©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/07/09

Great beginning.

Great start, I hope you will continue writing this story for a couple more chapters.

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by Anonymous09/12/09

I agree.

You should continue this story. It is too good to not have a second chapter or three.

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by Anonymous10/09/09

More please.

I loved reading this story. Please write more chapters to it.

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by Anonymous11/26/09

Yes More.

Don't write anything else until you finish this story. It is Too Good to be left unfinished.

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by Anonymous06/27/12

must be a lot of vigins here

this was subpar at best the other readers must be a bunch of virgins if they think it was great. as usual the story is unfinished this writer has never finished a story yet.

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