Great start, I hope you will continue writing this story for a couple more chapters.
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Anonymous09/12/09
I agree.
You should continue this story. It is too good to not have a second chapter or three.
by
Anonymous10/09/09
More please.
I loved reading this story. Please write more chapters to it.
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Anonymous11/26/09
Yes More.
Don't write anything else until you finish this story. It is Too Good to be left unfinished.
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Anonymous06/27/12
must be a lot of vigins here
this was subpar at best the other readers must be a bunch of virgins if they think it was great. as usual the story is unfinished this writer has never finished a story yet.
Great beginning.
Great start, I hope you will continue writing this story for a couple more chapters.
I agree.
You should continue this story. It is too good to not have a second chapter or three.
More please.
I loved reading this story. Please write more chapters to it.
Yes More.
Don't write anything else until you finish this story. It is Too Good to be left unfinished.
must be a lot of vigins here
this was subpar at best the other readers must be a bunch of virgins if they think it was great. as usual the story is unfinished this writer has never finished a story yet.
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