All Comments on 'Star Ch. 03'

that you posted another story. i hope that he realizes that he's being silly and lets her love him. Kudos for the excellent story. cant wait to read more.

Aww...i love this story. I feel Star's pain...sigh...keep up the good work!

...just don't wait so long for the next one. Great job though.

It took so long to get the update I forgot I read parts 1 and 2. I think it was a great addition. I can't wait to read the next part

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My eyes are misty. What a terrific story! I really didn't want to read this story at first because you don't update frequently, but that first chapter pulled me in and now I know I'm going to be miserable waiting for the next installment.

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Damn, girl, the story has a great flow, your writing is awesome, and while the chapters are somewhat short, you still manage to provide great substance in each. I feel like I have a great understanding of each of the characters as well.

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Other people have commented on the minor grammatical errors, but the story is so awesome, I'm not consciously aware of them - so, please, don't let that discourage you from updating more frequently (or, updating at all).

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I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter!

I absolutely loved your story and my mind won't stop reminding me of it. I know life gets complicated and busy, but I'm sure I'm not the only one waiting for the next chapter. So, please post it soon.

i hope you continue this becuz it is hella good

This is such a good read. I'm really enjoying the relationship between Mikey and Star.

wow, they always say, 'Love is not suppose to hurt."

Micah, Micah, Micah how dumb are you. It didn't work with those other girls because they weren't Star. If you were to let your feelings for Star come out you would have a real relationship and the sex would be amazing!!

This has been the best story I have read on this site! Please please please give us another with this winning recipe -intelligent black female intelligent alpha male and mythology.