All Comments on 'Kate's an Asshole'

I like the basic theme but, you need to go back and proofread this entry word by word. Fill in the missing words and punctuation. It is much too distracting and frustrating to try and read something like this.

Sure, there were some problems that could use a proof reader; but otherwise, a geat story. Thanks for writing.

Great story, the usual stuff just dont do it. This story is great and has a compelling idear to it. Here you have a woman in charge doing just the oposite of what you think will happen, story that lingers in memory after your read it. Nice job,

Can i ask for the continuation, as this one desperately needs one... please?