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Margaritas and Masturbation

byHelly_Robin©
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by Anonymous

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by srlmort09/10/09

Nice

The concept of the story is fabulous however you use the word "she" way too much. Consider using other words in front like: Quickly, she inserted two cubes inside or something like that. The she's are way too distracting. Once I got passed that it's a great idea.

Good Job!

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by PrincessErin09/12/09

Good

If nothing else I love the title of your story.

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by Anonymous09/14/09

Cute

I enjoyed this, it was cute and reasonably well written. Good luck in the contest!

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