My Son's Huge Cock Ch. 02

Not too bad,the story needs more than just fucking

The story needs some dialogue other than just fucking to make it a complete story. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed the fucking scenes, but there should be something else going on besides just fucking. Maybe showing more of the love between mom and her son would brighten the story up. It's still a good story though.Thanks ......Rich

add more

please write more...

more

liked it,wanted more, more story lines, look forward to him taking that hot ass also

OK

The sex is great for just another mom son story. I hope three is alittle deeper in text. Good luck.

Keep writing

Don't worry about the bullshit literary comments. The story is about fucking and it is great

dig the story, but...

Don't rely so much on cliches and catchphrases to tell your story.

And yeah, let's go outside the fucking to describe and flesh out the relationship further.

And for those who criticize the boy's cock size in the story, come on. What part of the title "My Son's Huge Cock" escaped you here? Give me (and the author) a break.

So darling

Such a sweet communication.......so darling... such love

Waoh!

My son's dick is 14 inches, long and very thick! I enjoy every bit of it.

OH FUCK

I came so hard to this, I love when my mom rides my dick and begs for my cum

your a sick whore

Great story

Clearly mom wants this 11 inches a LOT! Keep it coming.

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Nasty Story***

But a good read. Thanks for sharing.