Totally Hott!! Now if the two of them can keep it Together they should get better but Devin is to be Heard from.. And Jaylyn's Concious will get the Better of Her as well as the "Green Eyed Monster"
was i the only one who noticed that Lyn said, "I'm finally just another girl to you." And yet the only thing he heard was that she wanted him. This should get very interesting...cuz it seems he didnt even care about her actual feelings. it was as if she was another box to check.
the sex scene...fan-freaking-tastic. i'm just observing that while they finally did get together...that the after affect will probably not be what Lyn expects.
Great job MxdGrlMusic!
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Anonymous09/23/09
anxious
I like the dynamic between the characters in this series. I'm anxious for the next installment. hurry please
This story is unfinished and has been for almost 2 years. I actually liked it alot. Even if the chapters were short and the writting raw. I'm gonna start writting tonight and hope to have it up by this week. No longer than tuesday or thursday! Just look at my page for updates! And comment if you like it.
this story definitely would deserve one.., yet another story featuring a spineless and brainless bitch that of course just exists to fuck the biggest asshole around willingly.... Why do authors have to write multipart stories when all there is to be is a shallow storyline and plain charackters? A couple of sexscenes can be done on a page, no need to waste everybodies time reallly.... Off in search of a story with some sex scenes, as oposed to sex with some story scenes...
Why do these girls put up with being treated like trash in college LOL... he is such a prick for not telling her about Devin at least before he plowed her
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THAT WAS
HOT! HOT! HOT!
Damn
Pardon me while i wipe the drool off my keyboard!!!!
WOW!!!!!!!!!
That was super hot! It just keeps getting better with every chapter!
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Totally Hott!! Now if the two of them can keep it Together they should get better but Devin is to be Heard from.. And Jaylyn's Concious will get the Better of Her as well as the "Green Eyed Monster"
was i the only one
was i the only one who noticed that Lyn said, "I'm finally just another girl to you." And yet the only thing he heard was that she wanted him. This should get very interesting...cuz it seems he didnt even care about her actual feelings. it was as if she was another box to check.
the sex scene...fan-freaking-tastic. i'm just observing that while they finally did get together...that the after affect will probably not be what Lyn expects.
Great job MxdGrlMusic!
anxious
I like the dynamic between the characters in this series. I'm anxious for the next installment. hurry please
awesome
damn this story is hot you really have talent. im glad you wrote a complete story not just some trash that no feelings behind it well done
My try to finish it
This story is unfinished and has been for almost 2 years. I actually liked it alot. Even if the chapters were short and the writting raw. I'm gonna start writting tonight and hope to have it up by this week. No longer than tuesday or thursday! Just look at my page for updates! And comment if you like it.
if there would be negative ratings
this story definitely would deserve one.., yet another story featuring a spineless and brainless bitch that of course just exists to fuck the biggest asshole around willingly.... Why do authors have to write multipart stories when all there is to be is a shallow storyline and plain charackters? A couple of sexscenes can be done on a page, no need to waste everybodies time reallly.... Off in search of a story with some sex scenes, as oposed to sex with some story scenes...
Why do these girls put up with being treated like trash in college LOL... he is such a prick for not telling her about Devin at least before he plowed her
agree with amhj89
but damn that was some hot screwing
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