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pre mature ending
Decent plot line for a JPB story, but lousy ending. Almost like his brain quit.
this seems unfinished...
... I'd score it higher if I thought you were going to fill in the blanks. Maybe telling it from her side and letting us see if she ever learns how badly she misjudged him and realizes he's not just having a "snit-fit".
Who are you?
And what have you done with JPB?
How long you been reading this?
Some writers like to leave a little to the imagination of the reader. Because If one tries to think, the story can play out in a number of directions or at least variations of intensity. JPB has pointed you in the general direction, go the rest of the way across the street with out holding hands.
sucked 2 years ago --STILL sucks
Rob-- whom I guess is the author?-- finds out from a former data that Leslie has been telling ANY girl that he dates... that he has a STD. So HOW does this fucking idiot react? He decides that Leslie mst really love him.
Yeech.....
Once again we see a small weak vile man that generates
disgust from anyone reading this story. Beating up a few guys that have been fucking his wife is a feeble attemt to convince a reader that the husband
watch now and see some dumb fuck will ask WHY do we read JB stories if we hate them? Then real question is why does JB write such crap?
If anyone would know....
that this story sucks, it would be Harry. He appears to be the foremost authority on sucking, here at the LIT. Who, what, when, where, why and especially HOW! Perhaps he will put that in his NEXT story?
Don't be discouraged JPB, because with Harrys comment now posted, your story has just been deemed HIV Negative! YES,clean as a freakin whistle,WHOHOO, makes you feel good all over , yes no maybe?
O WELL, keep those stories coming, Cheers
Amusing Story
Wow! A real Wimp! Authenticated but not willing to live with the title.
So he fights back and gives us a reasonable story to read.
Thank you JPB for all your hard work!
HarryinVA, you're
the dumb fuck for commenting on a story you didn't like 2 years ago. Why shouldn't JPB keep writing, dumb fucks like you will keep reading him and make dumb comments.The only thing that sucked so far is your normal negative comment. As mentioned, why don't you favor us with one of your perfect stories? Or could it be your writing would suck moose cock, like your comments.
liked it
thanks, good story
Hell he should have taken the tire iron
He should have taken the tire iron to his cheating slut wife. She deserved it as much as his so called friends. Good story, thanks....Rich
single again..
then why not arrange an accident and run the bitch off a cliff and then collect the insurance and sell the house and have your revenge also.....if the police ask just tell them you still have a happy marriage and it was unfortunate that your wife died....you still loved her and would miss her ....it was her tha twouldnt move to kansas city to be with you not the other way around...you had tried to get her to move but she wouldnt leave her friends ....you were just waiting for her to get over that andf come be with you...then cry a little ....all your friends would vouch for you except chris and brad maybe ....none of the others would know as im sure your wife wouldnt tell them why you left ...sillly bitch ..other wise she would have filed for divorce
A Follow-up
is needed to end this Story. the Divorce the Wrangling for position.everything a Bitch would Do .He should also Hire a Private Detective to get Evidence to use against Her and any of Her Lovers Esp. the Married Ones or Co-Workers of His
Very Good Story
Interesting repost of older version . . .
The tire iron beating of several guys who cuckolded our hero makes for nice feelings of revenge for the readers but the reality is our Rob would be in jail for quite a long time for attempted murder X 2; threats from organized crime, a street gang with a lot of clout in the area, well, maybe such threats would fly, but Rob's threats wouldn't. The guys he beat up would have been in an emergency room with serious injuries; a cop would have started the questioning, and I'd bet Rob would get arrested, charged, and convicted -- a slam dunk for the prosecutor. Doesn't anyone here watch Law and Order? That's how it always happens on that show . . . Seriously, though, I see a number of plot holes despite a fairly well-written story. Firstly, if an ordinary teenage boy found out his dates quit going out with him because they were told he had gonorrhea by Leslie, his so-called friend (whom he was not even dating at the time), he would feel betrayed, stabbed in the back, not pleased because it meant Leslie loved him. I for one would not trust such a girl for a second, let alone start dating her. Secondly, the idea that Rob could not draw money to hire a private detective because Leslie would catch on is also hard to swallow. The simple way to do it is to draw a check a day after the monthly statement comes. This permits nearly a month before she would get another statement that could alert her, more than enough time to find out what's going on (I'm assuming she does not check their account balance all the time, but if she does, then Rob could take out a small loan, or a credit card cash advance, or ask his parents for some money, or even pawn a few belongings -- I'm certain there would be a way). But an I.T. manager would be smart enough not to do it himself. Just like the doctor who treats himself (he has a fool for a patient), trying to play sleuth when one has no training is just plain stupid, and Rob isn't stupid. Thirdly, waiting for Leslie to file a divorce after Rob took all their money is pretty ridiculous. Any man, wronged as Rob was, just could not keep the anger at bay and divorce would have been filed more quickly than you can say, "Jack Robinson." Fourthly, there is the nonsense that a threat to Chris would keep him quite about Rob's violent assault and avoid criminal charges for Rob, as I mentioned at the beginning. Of course, Leslie's behavior is pretty weird, but I guess one sees all types, even crazy ones, who act as if the other party (Rob) has lost it while nothing is wrong with them. I do agree with another reader that a sequel would be nice for this story. Thanks for writing.
Interesting repost of older version . . .
The tire iron beating of several guys who cuckolded our hero makes for nice feelings of revenge for the readers but the reality is our Rob would be in jail for quite a long time for attempted murder X 2; threats from organized crime, a street gang with a lot of clout in the area, well, maybe such threats would fly, but Rob's threats wouldn't. The guys he beat up would have been in an emergency room with serious injuries; a cop would have started the questioning, and I'd bet Rob would get arrested, charged, and convicted -- a slam dunk for the prosecutor. Doesn't anyone here watch Law and Order? That's how it always happens on that show . . . Seriously, though, I see a number of plot holes despite a fairly well-written story. Firstly, if an ordinary teenage boy found out his dates quit going out with him because they were told he had gonorrhea by Leslie, his so-called friend (whom he was not even dating at the time), he would feel betrayed, stabbed in the back, not pleased because it meant Leslie loved him. I for one would not trust such a girl for a second, let alone start dating her. Secondly, the idea that Rob could not draw money to hire a private detective because Leslie would catch on is also hard to swallow. The simple way to do it is to draw a check a day after the monthly statement comes. This permits nearly a month before she would get another statement that could alert her, more than enough time to find out what's going on (I'm assuming she does not check their account balance all the time, but if she does, then Rob could take out a small loan, or a credit card cash advance, or ask his parents for some money, or even pawn a few belongings -- I'm certain there would be a way). But an I.T. manager would be smart enough not to do it himself. Just like the doctor who treats himself (he has a fool for a patient), trying to play sleuth when one has no training is just plain stupid, and Rob isn't stupid. Thirdly, waiting for Leslie to file a divorce after Rob took all their money is pretty ridiculous. Any man, wronged as Rob was, just could not keep the anger at bay and divorce would have been filed more quickly than you can say, "Jack Robinson." Fourthly, there is the nonsense that a threat to Chris would keep him quite about Rob's violent assault and avoid criminal charges for Rob, as I mentioned at the beginning. Of course, Leslie's behavior is pretty weird, but I guess one sees all types, even crazy ones, who act as if the other party (Rob) has lost it while nothing is wrong with them. I do agree with another reader that a sequel would be nice for this story. Thanks for writing.
You have a very distorted view...
wife fucks you over... you do nothing to her, but you tire iron the guys taking a free peice of ass from a slut. It's funny, but most marriage counselers will tell you that this is a very female reaction... woman always want to claw the eye out of the other women fucking their husbands... men typically want to deal with the person breaking thier vow with them... maybe the author has some sexual identity issues here.
same gibberish again and again
read the first paragraph, skip to the last, and you will not miss any thing and will understand pretty much what the story is about.
Good to have JPB back
I like this story - once hubby figured out what was going on, he took action - lots of action. ViO may be correct about the legal stuff, however, this is just a story.
A tire iron to the neck would kill him.
So the dude fucked his wife...punch him in the face, kick him in the jewels, sure. He deserves that...but murder? Hope he likes the taste of priison food and taking Bubba's cock up his ass.
Stop sending in old stories....
....especially ones based on idiotic premises.16 years of cluelessness then decisive action?16 years of her attitude with no eruptions.Fuck-you.This time HIV closer to truth than most of these anonymous pussy commentators ,who just exist to see violent consequences.Anonymous comments lambasting Harry aren't funny.They just look weak. Give Harry shit if you want but have the spine to post some moniker so he can respond.Pistolpackinpete
good story...
'''would like a follow up if so inclined.
Thanks for the entertainment.
Ending?
This is a story begging for a Proper ending..
and with 2 of her lovers being Whipped it would be an interesting way to see how things go for the rest do they run and escape or stand and get a Beat Down.
Good Read
Thanks for sharing.
Damage is good BUT
She's the one that needs a tire iron up her twat. His friends were simply taking advantage of what was on offer.
WHAT IN THE WORLD CAME OVER ME
whatever it changed my life and style, TK U MLJ LV NV
Fun story. Finally a male character that knows what love is and what it is not.
No equivocating, he makes his move away.
Good Story
But the fact that he left town proves that he was embarrassed to stay. He has nothing to be ashamed of. The cheating whore skank cunt twat low-life asshole wife was the one cheating with everyone and everyone knew but him. He should have stayed and sued her for divorce and all of his so-called friends for alienation. He would have been vindicated and all the men divorced from their wives and the skank would have to move because no one would touch her with a ten foot pole.
How about that. I just wrote the alternative ending to this tale. I think I'm ready to publish.
OH YEAH
Disjointed
The flow felt more like a pachinko machine.
Has potential....
i liked it
JPB does a good story and a better one if the guy gets balls. cant wait for his new one to finish.
Good for him not being a willing cuckold...
No matter how much he has loved her or how good she is in the sack. He did the right thing. It is wives doing things like this and having that "like it or lump it" attitude that causes so many murders. There are hundreds of men in the pen that could not stand it and killed their cheating wives when something like this came up. I would have if it ever came up but I would have divorced her now and killed her later in a real sneaky way. And I would expect her to do the same thing if she caught me and I would never taunt her or tell her that it didn't hurt her all the times I had been doing it. Damn cheating sluts and them saying "It was just sex, you know I love you"!
16-20 years? Really?
I find it hard to believe that she was able to fuck all his friends without anyone telling him about it. In my experience, everyone either has a real friend who will tell him, or they know a spiteful person who can't wait to break the bad news. So, this is a highly improbable situation. More like a bad dream.
Sorry Bob
But I'm with Sugna on this one. I liked the story. Typical JPB story, well written, interesting tale of a cheating slut and her clueless husband. But what I found impossible to believe is that it went on for SO many years. He couldn't be smart enough to do his rather difficult job and at the same time be dumb enough not to see what his wife was doing. And I have to believe that at least ONE of his so-called friends would have told him what was going on. This story made all the guys look like nothing but simple minded pussy hounds. At least one of them had to be a good guy. It's simple odds. All this story needed to be a really, really good story was to shorten the period to 3 or 4 years. Even that is a tad long but more believable. Write on Bob.
CRAP
what kind of total dumbass could be that clueless. none of his friends were married? im sure the women in his friends lives would have noticed and said something. totally unbelievable.
Crap is right...
...you´ve done great stories and you have written a lot of junk - but this one is way below your capabilities. Nothing really fits, nothing is logical and the characters are stupid in a way that makes it hard to believe they could exist in reality.
The answer
The answer to the title question is simple, live a better life! Given the guys actions against the two he fucked up, I would suggest he get to know a lot of shady people...people who would love cash in exchange for a hit and run fatal accident, or a robbery gone bad...all while he was in plain view of a lot of witnesses of course.
Then perhaps once a year one of his former friends could experience a life altering, or fatal accident. OK, I'm perhaps a tad vindictive, but what the hell, better that than having to live with a cheating wife who is still breathing, specially when her demise puts money in his pocket. Besides, think of how anxious all his former friends will get when they start putting two plus two together and figuring out what the hurt or dead ones had in common!!! What fun, just to think of them constantly jumping at shadows and living in constant fear.
WHILE YOU ARE RETHINKING
think about the other ten dudes. TK U MLJ LV NV
The Only Way
The only way he should stay with her is for her to help him ambush all her lovers, for her to remain faithful, while setting him up with other women, so that HE can have some variety!
cheaper to....
Hiring a hit-man is way cheaper than a divorce.
He is living in a different city, which would help make him less of a person of interest as the cops call it.
Instead of half he would get it all plus the insurance on her.
good story
it was a reasonable reaction on the hubbies part. to say that I understand the wife's part, would be a lie. she had to know that fucking his coworkers would eventually lead to him finding out. according to the story, she says she loves him still. giving her mentality, perhaps she does.
bullshit
no way could he not find out in 16 years. someone would tip him off. he may be a retard and not notice, but his "friends" all had girlfriends and they we can assume arent all stupid. if she was fucking everybody in town then everyone wouldve known.
Leslie needs to have an "accident".
But this guy was so dumb for so many years, I'm surprised he can add 2 + 2 and get 4. Not one of your smarter characters Bob. And you didn't finish the story. Once again.
Gave it a four, Bob.
Everything was well done but physically assaulting the boyfriends. It's just not believable that he could get away with that. Most guys will fuck any woman that makes herself available, particularly an attractive one. Killing her is more believable, and I certainly wouldn't condone that. They wouldn't have fucked her if she didn't want them to. Weak characters, but it's all her fault. I think that you did that to just appease the violence prone anonys out there, and a true artist doesn't appease any audience just to make his/her art acceptable.
Business Trips
She made a big thing out of how she only did it on his or her business trips, she conveniently forgot to mention her FAKE business trips!
Single Again
Until you're ready to marry again, you can certainly play while you're separated!
Ok Bob, it was pretty good to a point, but beating up the lovers was over the top!
He's gone. As far as she's concerned, good riddance. Enough.
whoever thought beating the "lovers" was over the top is WRONG
ending is unsatisfactory, we/I need to know what is going to happen to her, when is she going to realize her past lovers are getting fucked up to the point of not being able to have sex. Lots left to write about. His revenge on her need not be physical but I would not rule out a broken pelvis, would like to know which lovers would quit their jobs as more and more of them got"mugged" and any of them put 2&2 together, maybe change the nature of the revenges?Get back to writing, you've got a couple pages to go or you only get a C for this story.
Enjoyed it
What are the chances something mysterious happens to scare off his new girlfriend?
another...
Another unfinished story!!
Got will it ever end?
He has a list
He has time to work through it a couple each year or so. They were his friends not random dudes she picked up. None of them warned him. Their betrayal was as bad as hers and laughed behind his back. Great pain is required.
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