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continue please
we have waited so long for your next stories. do not keep us waiting long. good writing as always...bravo!!! :)
Welcome Back!
I just love this series. It was definitely worth waiting for. Please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I feel sorry for Derrick but I'm glad Daisy is with Jake. I hope he lets her see how he really feels about her.
Glad to see....
u back and im hopin some HAWWTT lovin soon for these two!!!!
Brilliant!
Yay! More Jake & Daisy! This story is one of my favourites & updates are always welcome.
WTH?
Awww MG, you are such a tease! You call that short reading a chapter?!? MORE PLEASE and soon, I can't wait!
WTF?
That was just mean and cruel MG!!! We had to wait forever for that little snipet of the story. Whatever we did to deserve such cruelty we are sorry. More and soon please!!
more
love it! can't wait for more.
Awwww
Awwwww come on!! All the chapters of this story are good, but they're way too short! You roped me in and left me hanging. So not cool.
next chapter please...
common, dont let us wait too long for the next chapter...
aawww
please, please, please
go on with writing! i love your stories, especially the gentle cowboy series. you are awsome!
jake and daisy have to be together forever!!!
thx for your efforts :)
Finish Please
You have to finish this story. I love how well you use their internalized stories. Please finish this.
seriously finish the story
love the depth you've created in your characters.
It's hilarious that they simply can't talk to each other and therefore misinterpret each other.
It's also a pretty hot story. you've got to complete it.
please finish
Come on it's a new year already, finish this story . Do not leave us hanging, this is so good. Make finishing this story your New Years resolution.
Please continue!!
Your stories are so good! Plz Continue writing!!! We miss your amazing work. We're left hanging....Need more........
Good show ...
I like the emotional hold you have on your readers, while you put the characters together with real life reluctance, hesitation and deep personal interest(s) together ... Slowly. I'm glad I came online after you produced enough of the start for us late bloomers to play catchup. Enjoying theneasy read.
Best so far
Why didnt i stumbled upon this story sooner??? Givin' me goosebumps all over!!
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