hmm...the hubby finds out about the round heeled slut, doesn't beat up or financially ruin the undercover lover, and saves the slut's job? LOL that's why i enjoy your tales, just when i think i got you figured out, you throw a curve. can't wait for the next tale.
he can blackmail her with what he did for her and she can make him her boss...with a big raise....shit i would quit and take what money he surely has because of what he got in the sale of the house and what not and move away and get another job....who knows maybe it will be better tha nthe old one...i could not work for an ex slut wife that did to me what she did...unless i somehow was made her boss then maybe i could have her make some sales for me the way she used to for others....i wouldnt fuck her myself ...to afraid of disease ....but i could make money off her fucking others for me just another whore to sell
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Anonymous09/14/09
Bob's back!
And just as fucked up as ever
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Anonymous09/14/09
Cool
I liked it alot. It had the final irony that somehow life gives one. He does the right thing, throws her out, gives her a break, and then ends up at her tender mercies. Nice touch and very original.
I don't know if a follow on is warrented but it would be interesting.
Nice work and very clever ending.
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Anonymous09/14/09
oh well
who's telling me that somebody could do that just that way ? really strange revenge kind of.
You think it is going to end in some way and then BAM! BTW, I loved the ending, he didn´t forgive her but didn´t go into a blinding revenge rage. The possibilities at the ending make me laugh.
No problem at all, she's dying to see you, make a discrete meeting with her and make her go away, permanently. Killing a cheating whore is as easy as falling off a log. Don't believe all that shit you see on CSI, our police get lost finding the donut shop. Just be careful.
This is a new twist to your stories. I liked the story, I am still wondering about the ending and of course the outcome. Now would be a great time to send lovers wife some info about his secret.
I can see Amy fucking over him to make a few more bucks for her retirement fund. When a woman is so hell bent to get ahead, she won't let anything stand in her way,her marriage is the least thing that bothers the fucking whore. Sure she might have loved him at one point in her life, but when it comes down to the almighty dollar, her husband is the lowest pond scum on the face of the old earth, and she would eliminate him in a heart beat.He fucked up by not going after the company she worked for on morality charges and her boss for alienation. Even if he didn't get any money out of them, he could have extracted his pound of flesh, fucked over them as they did him.
Apparently she would prefer to have him instead of the company and she respects enough to not harass him in anyway. But still I do believe that she influenced the decision to buy his company up in hopes og re-establishing contact...
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Anonymous09/14/09
When she says that she loves him,
he should have said, "But clearly you love yourself more. If you loved me, you would have trusted me to make sure that in our partnership, both would have security and happiness. But you only made sure you were taken care of by cheating on me to gain it. You think you love me, but in fact, you really only love yourself." Good story, well executed, BUT you did it again. You left a very important point at the end unresolved. You seem to take great pleasure in doing this is your stories. And in this one, you make it too big to ignore: does he loose his job because he was stupid enough to give up his leverage over her. He is a man of his word, you made that clear, so he will never reveal what she did even at the cost of his own security. You really need to tell us what you think happened and stop leaving important points unclear or unresolved: this is not fair to us who are fans of yours.
A great story with a typical JPB twist at the end!
Like a great many of your stories this one ends on a note of irony. I never cease to be amazed at how you manage to put such fascinating twists into so many of your tales. Thanks for the entertainment and keep them coming.
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Anonymous09/15/09
Watching Closet Watching Closet Watching Closet
Oh could there be a just plane bobie story wherein closet watching wasn't a major sick part of your theme?
When you stop watching and in this case like many of your others the wife whore suffers NOT - he lovingly sticks up for her [cmon - a watching wimpus who respects her???] but he now helplessly and hopelessly wonders when her now his boss axe will fall - again [What???].
Gee - he can lose his self respect again.
Could someone please point out the erotic arousing parts? Was it when all her fellow employees tell him she's a great fuck and a contest prize? While he watches her blow her boss? While he watches from da closet while she fucks her boss - again???
And for these sordid reasons there is writer acclaim???
this one is better than JPB last few stories. I dont understand Cageytee high regard of JPB an I like cageytee's stories a lot.
yes JPB is a very creative and skillfil writer. But he OFTEN leaves the main issue Unresolved. This story is a classic case of it.
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Anonymous09/15/09
The ending is plain stupid
Why should be be concerned she will eliminate him. He has the goods. She can still be fired. Better yet have her start to pay you 500.000 a year not to work and to travel around the world. The wife was/is a whore. She probably is still fucking bosses and clients, her reputation would almost guarantee it. Maybe it is time to put an alienation of affection suit on dear old Jason and a sexual harassment suit on his ex wife for sending him the cards since he is an employee under her. As I said the ending is stupid. Then again the guy living in ignorance of his wifes life is also stupid, so stupid is as stupid does.
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Anonymous09/15/09
Nice Twist
In the end, when his job is in her hands, let open to show WHAT she is.He´s much better than her.
Is they are NEVER dull and it is always hard to predict where a story is going. Are his stories all CUCK stories? No. Are they all Slutwife stories? No. Do his stories get lots of comments from readers who have read his stories and know what to expect, Yes they do, and the readers still complain. Keep writing JPB.
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Anonymous09/15/09
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Anonymous09/15/09
stupid wimp story
stupid story
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Anonymous09/16/09
You names your writing game just plain.
What shit!!!!! Well written shit I might add, but a shitty story.
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Anonymous09/16/09
stupid wimp story?!???? WTF?
How was his actions wimpy? What the fuck did you expect him to do? Stone her? Beat the fuck out of her? What the fuck is wrong with you because here, we don't want to be with someone, we divorce them.
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Anonymous09/16/09
haha
yea, he wasnt that wimpy although instead of blackmailing jason for money, he did it so his cheating wife would have her precious job security. that part was retarded. thats also why i gave you a 50 because how retarded could that guy be? he loved her enough to give the security she desperately wanted but still wants to work with her? what she did was fucked up but i dont think it would have been as bad if she wasnt so open about it. i mean fuck, everyone knew what she did and they even had pictures!
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Anonymous09/17/09
Stupid story
I'm sure a secretary who describes herself as "a whore, a round-heeled slut, the company punchboard" would get promoted to VP, president, or CEO. The husband was a pathetic wimp, and so is the author.
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Anonymous09/17/09
Just Plain Bad
One of the worst stories you have ever written. I wouldn't have expected something this bad to come from you.
and riled natives out there at the same time. I like others think the writing is superb, but the climax where the husband saves her whoring ass and does not sue the company and then sits there with the possibility that he could loose his job - yah, I know the movies and pictures still exist - but how ironically stupid can you make people before your characters are just too dumb to breathe? Too often you leave off too soon, but this time you did not stop soon enough. Boy, do you know how to make the readers crazy!@!!
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Anonymous09/29/09
a different reaction
go after them all, no exception. ambition there should have its price, for jason too
his disproprtionate reaction. no level of love could justify the extent he went out of his way to smooth her path. Quite simply, he had no self respect. Certainly not realistic.
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Anonymous12/06/09
Another chapter
I would love to see another chapter for this one so as to tie up the ;ose ends
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Anonymous12/06/09
dumb dumb dumb
Sorry, you burn her and jason to the ground, just another wimp cockold jpb story, yuck.
Yikes, another JPB special [translated to a pile of dog shit that only fags like shoe enjoy.]
JPB - your the master at the wimp & slut wife specials and your faithful following of idiots like "shoe no IQ" can't wait to relish in their spent leavings to await your next pitiful excuse for a tale.
Yes. How incredibly unrealistic. A pretty and intelligent girl who is willing to screw somehow doesn't succeed.
Granted her reputation is ruined, but so what? She got to where she wanted to be...almost.
And like so many girls who trade their virtue for mere coin, she finds that coin is easy to get. The intangibles like love, self respect, etc are a lot harder to accumulate.
Unfortunately, Bob didn't deal with that. Perhaps in a future story.
Fuck her security! She can try to spin it any way she wants, but I know all she is is the companies whore... She's fucking her way to the top, she didn't get promoted because she did her job well -- no! As long as she spreads her legs she gets a check... I personally would've taken her precious security. I bet you her parents are so proud of their company whore daughter, what was the purpose of going to school & getting a degree & all she had to do was give up some ass?
Another cheating whore skank slut wife using her pussy to get ahead and expecting the husband to forgive her. Amy's Security my ass. He should have let everything be known and everyone involved would have to pay the price for her cheating.
I HATE CHEATING WIVES
and it is a big thing for me to say that i loved one of jpb stories, the husband didnt go on a suing spree and he didnt arrange for her lovers to be attacked in a dark ally and he didnt fuck her one last time after he found out and then divorce her like many of jpb stories, no he just left after he simply realizing that there is nothing to save, well, there is one thing that i hated and it is the same in nearly all jpb stories and that is i was left hanging after his last paragraph, i mean you can do this in a couple of your stories, but you need to have a conclusion in others, and this one definitely need one. as i said, a great story from a great a writer although i hate a big number of your stories.
Congrats JPB, you imagineered a clever twist on blackmail stories. Utilizing the redundancy anxieties of modern corporate life to give all your readers heartburn.
Still, thinking a little deeper, Sam does have the film and photos. Just the slightest hint of possible inconvenience, any failure to retain his present position despite layoffs and what the hell, perhaps a promotion and raise during restructuring for being so 'cooperative'. For the betterment of the corporate interests, of course.
Perhaps a quiet talk with Amy and Jason could 'incentive' them to confidentially offering him a golden parachute or lucrative early retirement package. To just quietly ride off into the sunset.
What's the old saying about the Good Old Boys Club: "It's not what you can do that matters but rather who you know and what have you done for them recently".
The modern version of being a Tall, Male, White Anglo-Saxon Predator is: "What counts is, what dirt you know about who you know".
English
getting mellow in your old age JPB
hmm...the hubby finds out about the round heeled slut, doesn't beat up or financially ruin the undercover lover, and saves the slut's job? LOL that's why i enjoy your tales, just when i think i got you figured out, you throw a curve. can't wait for the next tale.
cdII
well maybe
he can blackmail her with what he did for her and she can make him her boss...with a big raise....shit i would quit and take what money he surely has because of what he got in the sale of the house and what not and move away and get another job....who knows maybe it will be better tha nthe old one...i could not work for an ex slut wife that did to me what she did...unless i somehow was made her boss then maybe i could have her make some sales for me the way she used to for others....i wouldnt fuck her myself ...to afraid of disease ....but i could make money off her fucking others for me just another whore to sell
Bob's back!
And just as fucked up as ever
Cool
I liked it alot. It had the final irony that somehow life gives one. He does the right thing, throws her out, gives her a break, and then ends up at her tender mercies. Nice touch and very original.
I don't know if a follow on is warrented but it would be interesting.
Nice work and very clever ending.
oh well
who's telling me that somebody could do that just that way ? really strange revenge kind of.
That is why I like about JPB stories
You think it is going to end in some way and then BAM! BTW, I loved the ending, he didn´t forgive her but didn´t go into a blinding revenge rage. The possibilities at the ending make me laugh.
Interesting ending.
Any chance for a sequel?
Interesting ending.
Any chance for a sequel?
Simple
No problem at all, she's dying to see you, make a discrete meeting with her and make her go away, permanently. Killing a cheating whore is as easy as falling off a log. Don't believe all that shit you see on CSI, our police get lost finding the donut shop. Just be careful.
OK what happened to JPB
This is a new twist to your stories. I liked the story, I am still wondering about the ending and of course the outcome. Now would be a great time to send lovers wife some info about his secret.
The boy just gets fuck every way he turns
I can see Amy fucking over him to make a few more bucks for her retirement fund. When a woman is so hell bent to get ahead, she won't let anything stand in her way,her marriage is the least thing that bothers the fucking whore. Sure she might have loved him at one point in her life, but when it comes down to the almighty dollar, her husband is the lowest pond scum on the face of the old earth, and she would eliminate him in a heart beat.He fucked up by not going after the company she worked for on morality charges and her boss for alienation. Even if he didn't get any money out of them, he could have extracted his pound of flesh, fucked over them as they did him.
Lots of fun
Apparently she would prefer to have him instead of the company and she respects enough to not harass him in anyway. But still I do believe that she influenced the decision to buy his company up in hopes og re-establishing contact...
When she says that she loves him,
he should have said, "But clearly you love yourself more. If you loved me, you would have trusted me to make sure that in our partnership, both would have security and happiness. But you only made sure you were taken care of by cheating on me to gain it. You think you love me, but in fact, you really only love yourself." Good story, well executed, BUT you did it again. You left a very important point at the end unresolved. You seem to take great pleasure in doing this is your stories. And in this one, you make it too big to ignore: does he loose his job because he was stupid enough to give up his leverage over her. He is a man of his word, you made that clear, so he will never reveal what she did even at the cost of his own security. You really need to tell us what you think happened and stop leaving important points unclear or unresolved: this is not fair to us who are fans of yours.
A great story with a typical JPB twist at the end!
Like a great many of your stories this one ends on a note of irony. I never cease to be amazed at how you manage to put such fascinating twists into so many of your tales. Thanks for the entertainment and keep them coming.
Watching Closet Watching Closet Watching Closet
Oh could there be a just plane bobie story wherein closet watching wasn't a major sick part of your theme?
When you stop watching and in this case like many of your others the wife whore suffers NOT - he lovingly sticks up for her [cmon - a watching wimpus who respects her???] but he now helplessly and hopelessly wonders when her now his boss axe will fall - again [What???].
Gee - he can lose his self respect again.
Could someone please point out the erotic arousing parts? Was it when all her fellow employees tell him she's a great fuck and a contest prize? While he watches her blow her boss? While he watches from da closet while she fucks her boss - again???
And for these sordid reasons there is writer acclaim???
Surely someone jests
Better than last few
this one is better than JPB last few stories. I dont understand Cageytee high regard of JPB an I like cageytee's stories a lot.
yes JPB is a very creative and skillfil writer. But he OFTEN leaves the main issue Unresolved. This story is a classic case of it.
The ending is plain stupid
Why should be be concerned she will eliminate him. He has the goods. She can still be fired. Better yet have her start to pay you 500.000 a year not to work and to travel around the world. The wife was/is a whore. She probably is still fucking bosses and clients, her reputation would almost guarantee it. Maybe it is time to put an alienation of affection suit on dear old Jason and a sexual harassment suit on his ex wife for sending him the cards since he is an employee under her. As I said the ending is stupid. Then again the guy living in ignorance of his wifes life is also stupid, so stupid is as stupid does.
Nice Twist
In the end, when his job is in her hands, let open to show WHAT she is.He´s much better than her.
One thing about JPB Stories
Is they are NEVER dull and it is always hard to predict where a story is going. Are his stories all CUCK stories? No. Are they all Slutwife stories? No. Do his stories get lots of comments from readers who have read his stories and know what to expect, Yes they do, and the readers still complain. Keep writing JPB.
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stupid wimp story
stupid story
You names your writing game just plain.
What shit!!!!! Well written shit I might add, but a shitty story.
stupid wimp story?!???? WTF?
How was his actions wimpy? What the fuck did you expect him to do? Stone her? Beat the fuck out of her? What the fuck is wrong with you because here, we don't want to be with someone, we divorce them.
haha
yea, he wasnt that wimpy although instead of blackmailing jason for money, he did it so his cheating wife would have her precious job security. that part was retarded. thats also why i gave you a 50 because how retarded could that guy be? he loved her enough to give the security she desperately wanted but still wants to work with her? what she did was fucked up but i dont think it would have been as bad if she wasnt so open about it. i mean fuck, everyone knew what she did and they even had pictures!
Stupid story
I'm sure a secretary who describes herself as "a whore, a round-heeled slut, the company punchboard" would get promoted to VP, president, or CEO. The husband was a pathetic wimp, and so is the author.
Just Plain Bad
One of the worst stories you have ever written. I wouldn't have expected something this bad to come from you.
crock
What a cuck crock of shit!
You really launched a bomb with this one
and riled natives out there at the same time. I like others think the writing is superb, but the climax where the husband saves her whoring ass and does not sue the company and then sits there with the possibility that he could loose his job - yah, I know the movies and pictures still exist - but how ironically stupid can you make people before your characters are just too dumb to breathe? Too often you leave off too soon, but this time you did not stop soon enough. Boy, do you know how to make the readers crazy!@!!
a different reaction
go after them all, no exception. ambition there should have its price, for jason too
An interesting story but what spoiled it was
his disproprtionate reaction. no level of love could justify the extent he went out of his way to smooth her path. Quite simply, he had no self respect. Certainly not realistic.
Another chapter
I would love to see another chapter for this one so as to tie up the ;ose ends
dumb dumb dumb
Sorry, you burn her and jason to the ground, just another wimp cockold jpb story, yuck.
and?
what happen next?
he will stay in the company?
she is behind the buy of the company?
JPB
Please tie this one off
Yikes, another JPB special [translated to a pile of dog shit that only fags like shoe enjoy.]
JPB - your the master at the wimp & slut wife specials and your faithful following of idiots like "shoe no IQ" can't wait to relish in their spent leavings to await your next pitiful excuse for a tale.
JPB has done it again
That right he has served yet another steaming pile where the husband get screwed over whilst the cheating wife gets away scot free
Fighting...whatever
Yes. How incredibly unrealistic. A pretty and intelligent girl who is willing to screw somehow doesn't succeed.
Granted her reputation is ruined, but so what? She got to where she wanted to be...almost.
And like so many girls who trade their virtue for mere coin, she finds that coin is easy to get. The intangibles like love, self respect, etc are a lot harder to accumulate.
Unfortunately, Bob didn't deal with that. Perhaps in a future story.
pathetic
what a fucking wimp! long live America
4****
Not original so I deducted 1*.
4 stars
Fuck her security! She can try to spin it any way she wants, but I know all she is is the companies whore... She's fucking her way to the top, she didn't get promoted because she did her job well -- no! As long as she spreads her legs she gets a check... I personally would've taken her precious security. I bet you her parents are so proud of their company whore daughter, what was the purpose of going to school & getting a degree & all she had to do was give up some ass?
Damn
Another cheating whore skank slut wife using her pussy to get ahead and expecting the husband to forgive her. Amy's Security my ass. He should have let everything be known and everyone involved would have to pay the price for her cheating.
I HATE CHEATING WIVES
Another coward husband
He should just kill himself. The ending was total bullshit, but cowards will love it.
what a
dumb ass!
loved this one
and it is a big thing for me to say that i loved one of jpb stories, the husband didnt go on a suing spree and he didnt arrange for her lovers to be attacked in a dark ally and he didnt fuck her one last time after he found out and then divorce her like many of jpb stories, no he just left after he simply realizing that there is nothing to save, well, there is one thing that i hated and it is the same in nearly all jpb stories and that is i was left hanging after his last paragraph, i mean you can do this in a couple of your stories, but you need to have a conclusion in others, and this one definitely need one. as i said, a great story from a great a writer although i hate a big number of your stories.
It was a good story until
you had him end up working for her. Why do all your stories seem to screw the husband over so much? What secrets are you hiding?
Would you like relish on that?
Congrats JPB, you imagineered a clever twist on blackmail stories. Utilizing the redundancy anxieties of modern corporate life to give all your readers heartburn.
Still, thinking a little deeper, Sam does have the film and photos. Just the slightest hint of possible inconvenience, any failure to retain his present position despite layoffs and what the hell, perhaps a promotion and raise during restructuring for being so 'cooperative'. For the betterment of the corporate interests, of course.
Perhaps a quiet talk with Amy and Jason could 'incentive' them to confidentially offering him a golden parachute or lucrative early retirement package. To just quietly ride off into the sunset.
What's the old saying about the Good Old Boys Club: "It's not what you can do that matters but rather who you know and what have you done for them recently".
The modern version of being a Tall, Male, White Anglo-Saxon Predator is: "What counts is, what dirt you know about who you know".
Hilarious
The idea that any company would promote it's corporate whore to a VP position and possibly CEO is gut bustingly funny.
Funny stuff.
But he's going to keep his job as long as he has the video. It would still cost Amy her job were her activities come to light.
Not Good Enough
Jason's wife deserved to know. Jason deserved to pay. Amy was a lying whore, she deserved to pay as well. Stupid.
Fuck finish this one , where does it go
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