All Comments on 'Simple Tricks Ch. 02'

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fastandsloppy over 14 years ago

Demon Sperm is like Aloe Vera in Hell

The first chapter had its charms but lacked something. I think your story is starting to catch fire with this one.

I really like the idea of Paige coming at the feel of her blood flowing over her clit and the little twist of her being lured to beg for the soothing demon sperm was brilliant. Plus the whole thing was just really well written.

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