All Comments on 'The Supermarket Ch. 02'

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
Rather intense

Not turning out how I thought it would. Just seems like a meeting place for people then go elsewhere to find their pleasure. Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
hmmmmm

You obviously have no idea that a condom makes you basically unable to feel anything except heat.

LitRiterLitRiterabout 10 years agoAuthor
You might want to try,,,

...buying a higher quality product, as I'm sure you're right if a standard Hefty bag is being used. I personally prefer to go without, but when I need to use one, I don't scrimp on quality.

I hope you enjoyed the story otherwise.

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