Interesting.. not bad at all.. interesting the way the wife reacted about Beth, got a niggling suspicion that she did more tan hangout with the boss during her trip.. Continue..
I like this, but I'd rather wait & read it all at once.
-- srgeek --
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Anonymous09/17/09
Slut husband
that fucks anything with a pussy behind his wife's back and now SHE's suspect? Let's get it over with and have the big reveal that she's just a big a whore as he. The sex is hot but his narcissistic character irritates me. He loses some weight, which he's intent on sharing and obsessing about at every turn, and now he's Cock Master Extraordinaire and every woman he comes in contact with falls slave to his dick. He's like some kind of sexual superhero, always hard, fucks a dozen women in a single bound,zero recovery rate needed, and cums like Mt Pinatubo. I like it, it's like reading Sci/Fi! Thanks for the entertainment.
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Anonymous10/14/09
Doing Fine with this writing
Clearly we are going to learn that the wife has been up to things to. So what? So, he can recover in seconds and probably fly faster than a bullet. So what? There is no need to rush - it's a journey - not a destination.
Also, if you can't get off to this story so far, there is nothing that can get you off!
I guess I should say - I'm enjoying the story.
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Anonymous01/30/11
awesome
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Anonymous11/01/11
Sceptical
Good so far. But I fear all the talk of inviting JT over. I REALLY hope you're not going to turn this story into some crazy swapping swingers nightmare. I'm not sure if I want to read anymore chapters. I have a feeling that if I do, the story is heading in the completely wrong direction for me, and I will regret starting on this story in the first place...
English
Not Bad...
Interesting.. not bad at all.. interesting the way the wife reacted about Beth, got a niggling suspicion that she did more tan hangout with the boss during her trip.. Continue..
Awesome, Keep it going
I think the same thing about the wife
I like this, but I'd rather wait & read it all
I like this, but I'd rather wait & read it all at once.
-- srgeek --
Slut husband
that fucks anything with a pussy behind his wife's back and now SHE's suspect? Let's get it over with and have the big reveal that she's just a big a whore as he. The sex is hot but his narcissistic character irritates me. He loses some weight, which he's intent on sharing and obsessing about at every turn, and now he's Cock Master Extraordinaire and every woman he comes in contact with falls slave to his dick. He's like some kind of sexual superhero, always hard, fucks a dozen women in a single bound,zero recovery rate needed, and cums like Mt Pinatubo. I like it, it's like reading Sci/Fi! Thanks for the entertainment.
Doing Fine with this writing
Clearly we are going to learn that the wife has been up to things to. So what? So, he can recover in seconds and probably fly faster than a bullet. So what? There is no need to rush - it's a journey - not a destination.
Also, if you can't get off to this story so far, there is nothing that can get you off!
I guess I should say - I'm enjoying the story.
awesome
Sceptical
Good so far. But I fear all the talk of inviting JT over. I REALLY hope you're not going to turn this story into some crazy swapping swingers nightmare. I'm not sure if I want to read anymore chapters. I have a feeling that if I do, the story is heading in the completely wrong direction for me, and I will regret starting on this story in the first place...
Great story
Don't stop just yet heheheheheh keep the pen full of ink and keep writing.!!!!
I'll be back ...
... for the next chapter just as soon as I finish siting the new hot tub and calling the contractor. Damn, that was hot!
OMG if only my girlfriend did what Holly did...
...I'd ask her to marry me on the spot
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