All Comments on 'Hart Family at an African Retreat Ch. 03'

Why are you writing this story? is it for your pleasure or the readers? I think it's just your pleasure.

Hey it is a fantasy. If you don't like it, don't read it. I on the other hand really liked it. Could have been a bit longer. Please keep it going and ignore the cretins.

Let people say what they will.

Love your stories. They are similar to the ones written by expatdad, whose stories are truly one of a kind. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next edition.

Please dont make us wait... there arent enough well written white submission stories.....this is art!!!

More please

Loved your stories, noticed it has been a couple of months since your latest, hope you will continue. As mentioned by another reader, I am also a fan of 'Expatdad' or as he is sometimes referred, 'Author on Africa' depending on which site. Anyway, I was so pleased to find another author delving into this field and will be watching for more of your work. It seems a shame there are so few of you out there. Thanks once again. jim

I would like to thank the readers for the compliments. Since I travel quite a lot I have not had the time to write. Just returned from Panama and Costa Rica.

As for Expatdad, he is truly one of a kind with experience to back it up.

I just submitted another story for approval...."A black safari for Sophie." I hope that all of you enjoy it although I know there are detractors out there that will find it appalling.

JonathanT

Great idea for a story. Was looking to read something like this.

I love your storythread. It is tightly written with a full control over the sensuality and sexulality. Love to see more from your fruitful mind. Keep up with the good works.

This was OK but I didn't like it as much as chapters 1 & 2. Do you plan on writing about what happened to the family after the retreat? It's hinted at several times but never really described.

A few minor nitpicks--I don't get the fascination with the sexiness of a Rolex watch. This is mentioned an awful lot throughout the stories yet seems an unlikely fetish. Second, the word "quite" is used several times when you meant "quiet."

All you have done is fill your story with popular stereotypes of blacks passed down by White Europeans for centuries. And as for the gay themes palyed out in your stories, an African would never be open about being homosexual. To do so would mean certain death.

Very enjoyable. Keep up the good work.

Thank you for this story. I think you created interesting characters and a sexy-fun story line. It's clear that the black African's had their way with this family and in a sense it could be seen as abusive but...your creative way of telling this white families story helps the reader to enjoy the devlopments instead of fretting over events as they unfold. I think black and white readers of yours can appreciate this adventure! Please write more like it...

Bring Tia to witness black sexing of her two older sisters and she will quickly cave in. Next project is domestication of strict racist Mom into a submissive housewife to all comers at a drop of the hat by a black domne coming in as guest of the daughters.

Love to have heard how Shawn was taken by the black guy

Is there going to be another chapter to the story.

So what happened to Shawn write more about his experiences please....

Excellent story, but please write one to finish the story about Shawn.

Please continue the story

please continue.

it was amazing.

I would like to follow the story

Loved it, great story, well written.

Chloe tv

The date is 12/21/21. I've made many attempts to contact the author of these stories to no avail. I wish he would finish his stories, but I understand if he moved on.

would love to hear more about Shawn getting fucked in a seat while his sister watches. maybe he can lick his sister clean and suck the cock that was in her while the driver fucks her to get it hard for a second round.

would love to see both the husband and wife get fucked by the men fucking their daughters. set up by the daughters of course. they walk in and just get undressed in the front room, the wife just says OMG and she squeezes her husbands hand and whispers that's a huge cock in her husbands ear. he squeezes her hand back and nods. they both lick their lips and the men come and stand in front of them both sitting on the couch. the husband is the first to move and reaches up and holds the big cock, his wife again says OMG and he opens his mouth to suck his first cock ever. his wife moans that's hot. the daughters both say ya it is suck that cock daddy. the husband reaches over to the man standing in front of his wife and grabs his cock and raises it up to his wife's lips and holds it for her as he sucks the cock in front of him. she does not hesitate, and opens her mouth and sucks a huge black as her husband holds it for her. she is so wet from watching her husband suck and holds a second cock for her.

the black men next to the two daughters say get undressed. and both daughters AND the husband and wife strip. the men that were getting blow jobs told the husband and wife to bend over the armrests of the couch and face each other, both comply. the one lubes his cock and the other enters the wife while he watches. the wife says OMG that's big tour way biger then my husband, and at that same time the husband feels a big black cock getting pushed in his ass as his wife watches another man fuck his ass as he grunts out UUUhhhhhhhh as a 10 inch cock is pushes in his no longer virgin ass. the two men standing with the daughters finished undressing and put their cock in the faces of the white couple and get their cocks sucked while the pair are fucked like they never knew. the husband is moaning and grunting with a second cock in his mouth and wife is cumming so many times not only from the pleasure of a huge cocks. but watching her husband also enjoying the same treatment. the cock in his ass has been rubbing his prostate for the last 5 minutes and his own cock is hard as a rock he is about to cum from being fucked it just amazes him how good it feels. the pulls the second cock from he mouth and yells to his wife i am about to cum. he sprays his load on the armrest and stays hard and start to suck cock again. the man in his wife yells your wife's pussy is so tight i am going to cum. he pulls out and taps and nods to the man in the husbands mouth to switch places. the wife sees the cock that was just in her pussy enter her husband mouth, and wells taste my pussy on that dirty cock suck it clean for me and get it hard so it can fuck you too. the cock in his ass cums and it triggers him to cum again. and he tells his wife oh god yes he's cumming in my ass and i am cumming again. the second man he was just sucking has his reposition and has him on his back, with his ass on the armrest and legs in the air and up on the large black mans shoulders as the second black cock enters his ass. OMG yes fuck my ass while my wife watches me be a slut for black cocks. the second cock in her pussy cums , and she is moved this time kneeling over her husbands head so he can lick her pussy clean, as he is cleaning her a cock enters her ass and he gets a birds eye view. the man fucking her husband say suck your husband little cock while i fuck him like the sissy bitch he is. you can lick his ass clean when i am done with him. that thought makes her cum so hard sh squirts all over her husbands face under her.

they both turn their heads when they hear their daughters squeal as they are fucked next to them, the man that was in his wife is now letting her up, the man in his ass just made his cum again, and in his down hill, ass up when he cums he shoots his cum all over his face and chest. the black man smacks the wife ass and says clean him up slut, and don't forget to lick his ass clean. she licks his face and kisses him, licks his chest and kisses him, she whispers in his ear you like the taste of your cum baby? he gives her a quick umm and she gets up and kneels behind him and sticks her tongue in his ass and he moans and says oh shit that feels good your going to have to do this again. she says oh hell ya, where going to do all this again..

I read the stories of this author for the first time in my youth, for a long time afterwards I was impressed, it's a pity that he doesn't write anymore