This is a great story that only goes to prove the old addage of becareful what you ask for because you just might get it.
Jack is getting it in ways he never dreamed possible. My only question would be why he is not enjoying himself completely? I'm sure there is a twist up comming for him but for the time being Jack old boy, just sit back and enjoy the ride!
Is It Just My Perception or Jack is Really Stupid?
Consider this, a 18 years old virgin who rejects free pussy. Can't you see how wrong that sentence is? I mean, it's shown in this story that Melissa is somewhat compliant to Jack's wishes. Why didn't he take advantage of that? He can order her to stop mentioning the stuff he doesn't like and to only have sex with him, so there would be no need for condom. Even if he didn't ban her from having sex with other people, the story can still forgo condom. It's a fantasy world after all, why didn't just use artistic license and declare that she's clean. Nothing dampen my arousal more than the mentioning of condoms.
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A great romp in the Cemetery!
This is a great story that only goes to prove the old addage of becareful what you ask for because you just might get it.
Jack is getting it in ways he never dreamed possible. My only question would be why he is not enjoying himself completely? I'm sure there is a twist up comming for him but for the time being Jack old boy, just sit back and enjoy the ride!
Why
italics?
Is It Just My Perception or Jack is Really Stupid?
Consider this, a 18 years old virgin who rejects free pussy. Can't you see how wrong that sentence is? I mean, it's shown in this story that Melissa is somewhat compliant to Jack's wishes. Why didn't he take advantage of that? He can order her to stop mentioning the stuff he doesn't like and to only have sex with him, so there would be no need for condom. Even if he didn't ban her from having sex with other people, the story can still forgo condom. It's a fantasy world after all, why didn't just use artistic license and declare that she's clean. Nothing dampen my arousal more than the mentioning of condoms.
Why !!! Why!!
It's all italicized!!! it's driving me crazy! plus it's harder to read.
I'm pretty sure EVERYTHING on this page is italicized.
And I don't have a fucking clue why.
this guy is unbelievable
What kind of fucked up teenager that lives on his own bitches about getting pussy?
Why all the whining?
What kind of virgin boy would ever whine about getting laid? And these italics are pretty annoying.
All italics... dissapointing.
Decent plot, reasonably written, very readable... then there's the italics. I hate stories in all italics. 3 stars.
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