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Becoming a Slut Husband Alan

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/16/09

niiice

You are a great story teller. Always a pleasure reading your stuff no matter what the husband decides to do.

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by Britease09/16/09

Thanks

Good one JPB. Please keep them comming, and I'll keep reading them.

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by Anonymous09/16/09

Credit where credit is due - good story

Well thought out, well written story.

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by bruce2209/16/09

Creative!

The title worried me a bit. I was afraid that it was a euphenism for becoming a cuckold husband.... Besides recognizing that it was well imagined and written, I find that I liked it. Why expose yourself to possible prison and other happenings?

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by Anonymous09/16/09

different

In your original story there was no mention of Sam Wycliffe being black. What happened for you to change that aspect? The original I thoroughly enjoyed, did you want to titillate the rabid bigots and racists that haunt this site? I think your stories are pretty good except for the creampie ones. Those are pretty disgusting! But to change characters like that in order to stoke the growing pangs of hidden racism like this is somewhat beneath you.

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by Harryin VA09/16/09

Easily your BEST story in some time BUT!

folks.. note that JPB did in fact change this story from the 1st version of it. Easily your best story in some time. But I too have to wonder why you made the other guy Black when in the original version Sam was not.


Also I have to wonder about the attorney's advice. In so many JPB stories the husband is enraged he actually becomes ill when he finds out his wife has been fucking
8 black guys in the past month.

but then the husband decides to come home and start fucking the cheating whore wife. Which of course makes No sense.

here in this story the attorney tels Alan

"... The BIG thing is to stop having sex with her. If she throws your indiscretion at you, you can throw hers back at her, but if you exercise your conjugal rights with her AFTER finding out about her affair you will, in effect, have condoned what she did."

So we know that the author --JPB-- knows that resuming sexual relations with a cheating spouse is in effect saying
"Its OK...I dont mind".

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by Anonymous09/16/09

YES

Rope for two

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by miniac09/16/09

Priceless...

"He didn't get my best side" was funny as hell. Good job.

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by Anonymous09/16/09

I really LIKE this one!

I see his problem as one of strategic strategy and the logistics HE has to go thru to get anything like a fair deal from divorce and resent the hall outa putas gettin all the laws on her side. Damned good story!

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by digdaddyrich09/16/09

A really well written bit of work. JPB at his best

I loved the story and the outcome. the well laid out facts and content of the story made it a fun story to read. Thanks for the good story.....Rich

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by Anonymous09/16/09

Smart Story

Very entertaining story.

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by sexmate09/16/09

Excellent!

I love your stories! They are definately fun to read!
You are one of the premeire writers here on Literotica!

Thanks for writing!

sexmate

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by Anonymous09/16/09

you Go Dude

That was an awsome story, ty

PHillip

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by Anonymous09/16/09

Let me see if I follow this?

You are proposing that the person who files for divorce pays all the bills... hmmm... that doens't happen anywhere... and even if it did, this high paid VP went thru all this bullshit to save 3/4K in legal fees? How silly.

All he did was prove that he was a hippocrite. He feels what his wife did was wrong, so he went off and did it... both sides. Pretty much everyone in this story is an immoral scumbag... really struggled to care enough to read through to the end.

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by gatorhermit09/16/09

Yup! JPB at his Best...

I think this was a well written story and I liked the plot line. Great to have the unwilling cuckold husband get revenge and go on. Well done, JPB.

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by Anonymous09/16/09

re: Let me see if I follow this

You missed on other point. He was just promoted. Odds are the greater salary would have played a factor in the settlement. If so, he probably wasted money by not filing as soon as he found out what she was doing.

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by Anonymous09/17/09

A favorite of mine!

Great story: clean, clever, and to the point!

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by C_frommn09/17/09

Very Good Story

Unlike some I like Your Writing and the Fact that the Cheaters dont get away with it.

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by Vulcan_in_Ohio09/17/09

Good one.

Although one could quibble with some of the hero's lawyer's advice, it was still well-written and funny. This reminded me of the RPSUCH story, "Clark Kent or Superman?" The story had the same light-hearted, satiric air about it and, of course, a man who got even for his wife's cheating on him. I enjoy your stories; please keep writing.

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by Anonymous09/17/09

Good story but for racism....

....would be nice if commentators could learn to spell(hippocrite?-that's beyond funny.)-also,I'm going out on a limb here since anon in real world (but different galaxy?)-is so much smarter than I-but what makes you assume his salary is greater than hers? And where did attorney state that future earnings are considered marital assets?-pistolpackinpete

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by Anonymous09/17/09

Very good and sorry I didnt see any racism.

The slut got more than she deserved and better than a car accident. It isnt racism to not believe in racial intermingling of the sexes. Why try to pull race cards when the deck doesnt have any? He didnt like lying cheaters, he didnt like intermingling of the races in sex. Personal choices and not biased against any race. Grow up.

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by FionaVolpe09/17/09

So

was this supposed to be a more satisfying story for the masses than the original because you turned the bad guy even worse by being black? Whatever dude.

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by Anonymous09/17/09

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by Anonymous09/17/09

Great Story!

Another superb story from you JPB!

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by tazz31710/14/11

CHEATERS GET CHEATED ON

and become indignant when caught and reminded of. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by betrayedbylove03/04/12

HA HA

The cheated becomes the cheater and makes out better in the end. I don't approve of any cheating and this eye for an eye shit doesn't normally work in this type of situation. But it worked here and she fucked herself out of a loving marriage and he was blessed with his own harem.
Not in real life but a good story to read.

Yeah

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by chytown03/06/12

Thanks

For sharing.

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by BDEarth02/06/13

Well played!

A great story of revenge without violence; the husband had a great plan and carried it out so well!!

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by Overthefalls10/03/13

Good story about a husband with a plan.

Well done story with a slut wife that expected to be able to play and still keep her marriage. I especially enjoyed the last part where he got the chance to show her parents the PI report and managed to keep the house! That should have kept her warm at night. And as an added bonus? HARRY KINDA LIKED IT!

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by tae35200112/12/13

GREAT STORY 5 STARS

I have one question, with all the detective reports of her affair with this attorney? why didn't he sue for alienation of affection. The lawyer knows and everyone else does, you can sue a ham sandwich in civil court for anything. He already had proof. what else was there.

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by tazz31712/12/13

A STITCH IN TIME SAVES NINE

times the amount to be payed for the losing side, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by sugna01/12/14

Why?

Why can't more of these cheating wife stories by like this one? Finally a husband who is not an emotional wreck or a closet cuckold. That's right, when you find out she has cheated the marriage is OVER. All that is left to be done is get as much of your investment out of the dead marriage as possible. No need for payback, she isn't worth the trouble, she is a piece of shit, further contact will only get more stink on you. 5*!

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by Mustang88LX02/02/14

Yes! a Husband with backbone

Finally. Thanks for a good story.

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by Tw0Cr0ws02/28/14

so why ?

Why did she file for divorce ?
But honey, it was only a fling. ;)
Funny when the shoe is on the other foot.

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by Anonymous11/24/14

A MIRACLE! HARRY LIKED THIS STORY!

That means this must be the VERY best story EVER!!!! It only took JPB several years and many, many stories to win Harry over. Damn! I'm STILL laughing.... It was, in fact, a good story. I like how Alan managed to manipulate Laurie into paying for the divorce. And as a bonus he got to show the information to her parents. I hope he sent it to all their friends and her friends so that everyone could know who was responsible for the divorce. Well played Bob! Would that things like this happen in real life.

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by Nexttimeround09/05/15

not sure

if he really ends up in a good place but I see what he means when he says he hates the thought of his wife fucking black -- yes that's a terminator, it would be for me. The solution he employs is in fact very old fashioned -- 18th century even -- rather than sue the wife and admit to being a cuckold, the husband spends the night ostentatiously with a whore or whores, forcing her, or her family, to take action. Then a big deal is made out of him not quite saying that she has had an inappropriate relationship. There was a recent period drama along these lines.

Usually I'm for reconciliation and I find myself moved by her pleas to talk and try to "make nice" -- however he was right to do this I think.

And it was well and concisely told.

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by betrayedbylove10/18/15

Here's The Deal

Both are cheaters. However, she drew first blood and he retaliated by doing the same thing. In fiction, this works every time. He wins and she loses. All cheaters suck.

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by Anonymous11/10/15

Well that was very clever of him.

But if he had been really clever, he would have been stashing assets and trying to make sure she didn't know he had just gotten a big promotion and a raise. No sense in giving the bitch any more than you need to. Since he knew he wanted the house, he could have done some things to lower the value. Weeds don't get pulled, painting doesn't get done, anything that needs fixing stays broken. Things like that. Save some serious money if the value of the house goes down. Well played Bob.

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by christmas_ape01/29/16

so handsome

so cool, but with such heat.

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by Admiralbird34812/08/16

Love these stories. Good advice too lol

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by Ocker5112/22/16

I loved it

I wish I had been able to handle my situation that way. Mark one for the good guys👍🏻

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