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by EroticOrogeny09/18/09

Nice

No fun getting old.
You found a good form, too.

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by SweetOblivion09/18/09

good stuff

This would make an excellent theme for a villanelle with a bit of adjustment - but I rather like it in its present form too - well done. Sweet O.

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