All Comments on 'Dance the Dance'

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EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 14 years ago
Nice

No fun getting old.

You found a good form, too.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 14 years ago
good stuff

This would make an excellent theme for a villanelle with a bit of adjustment - but I rather like it in its present form too - well done. Sweet O.

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