Seven Year Itch

It's a good story,but seemed a little rushed

Some readers like tight little stories like this though, so to them it might be just right. To me I like a little more detail in the story and a lot more sex. I voted 100% because of the inventive story line and good writing.Thanks....Rich

It's a good story,but seemed a little rushed

Some readers like tight little stories like this though, so to them it might be just right. To me I like a little more detail in the story and a lot more sex. I voted 100% because of the inventive story line and good writing.Thanks....Rich

good story....

....but a little light on the retribution-pistolpackinpete

Time to dump the whole story with the wife there

Really should finish the story, kinda cowardly to not finish and show disrespect for your readers.

loved it. simple ,basic and well written

lame

I get the impression that these stories were written by the same young teenage indian boy. stories are short with no substance

Funny

But stupid.

How long did it take...

...to write these few sentences and what made you call this a "story"?

Let's see if IroningDragqueen

has still got his dribbling cock up Cantgetoff's pus leaking asshole. He appears to follow it everywhere. Two fat pedos in their basements.

Pranks and jokes

Interesting approach to humiliation of betrayers -

But in this instance it seems very effective - juvenile sure - so what - tak your fun where you can find it - they wrecked his marriage -

***1/2 (3.5)

:)

Incredibly outrageously funny

Your style of humor is outrageous and totally entertaining. The story stunk but it was hilarious. I couldn't rate it any less than five stars.

seven year itch

the story was not long enought

7 minute itch

Disappointingly short.