by wallywood
These pathetic bums go from story to story making the same derogotory, hateful statements. They themselves have never written a story or contributed in any way. Don't worry about what they say; just keep writing as much as pleases you. Feel free to delete any comment which does not benefit any future reader of your story. Just remember why you wrote the story in the first place.
I enjoyed your story. Creative ideas are rare on this site. I agree the commentators are the scourge of this site. Many of them bigoted and illiterate.
Story was good, original, i liked it, but LOVED the comments, you really rubbed the fur the wrong way on some, lol, and yet they keep reading
it was a good story should add to it more as the way it was started and left made it easy to make more parts to this