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Châtelet

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by Anonymous

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by nudepainter3909/23/09

All aboard!

Excellent! I look forward to the next ride.

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by Anonymous09/23/09

Truth is indeed stranger than Fiction

Loved it. The premise is totally relatable; know from personal experience!
Would love some more build-up, the state of mind before the ride, the unexpected caress that sets the mind wandering, the decisions that one has to grapple with in a split second etc.
Most of the fun in such a scenario is between the ears.
Looking forward eagerly for more.

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by Anonymous09/30/09

Great!

I live part of the year in Paris and I wish something like this would happen to me! Keep writing!

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by LittleRedHen12/08/09

Wow...

I want to get this train home from work!
Beautifully written, perfectly paced, VERY hot. Nice work :o)

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by uhctaw02/21/10

EROTIC

Please continue to write more

I have read two of your stories and they are very well written

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by Tristam_Watcher06/29/10

Paris Metro

excellent. you have to do all the Paris Metro stops, describes the trains, the seats, the time of day.

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by Spermwhale10/14/10

hot Hot HOT!!

... just like the inside of that Metro car! I agree with the other praise and hope we'll see more of these tales from the City of Light.

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by Anonymous01/26/11

Fantastic!

This might be my favorite story on this website! Please write more stories about Paris, especially from the woman's point of view. I liked Ecole Militaire as well.

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by Anonymous02/04/13

Wow!!! Sound too good to be true!

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by janiegirlUK08/08/15

Very hot

Love the silent sex in public. More please!

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by ashley198112/01/15

wish i was her

i love stories that end with a good hot creampie

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