Loved it. The premise is totally relatable; know from personal experience!
Would love some more build-up, the state of mind before the ride, the unexpected caress that sets the mind wandering, the decisions that one has to grapple with in a split second etc.
Most of the fun in such a scenario is between the ears.
Looking forward eagerly for more.
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Anonymous09/30/09
Great!
I live part of the year in Paris and I wish something like this would happen to me! Keep writing!
... just like the inside of that Metro car! I agree with the other praise and hope we'll see more of these tales from the City of Light.
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Anonymous01/26/11
Fantastic!
This might be my favorite story on this website! Please write more stories about Paris, especially from the woman's point of view. I liked Ecole Militaire as well.
All aboard!
Excellent! I look forward to the next ride.
Truth is indeed stranger than Fiction
Loved it. The premise is totally relatable; know from personal experience!
Would love some more build-up, the state of mind before the ride, the unexpected caress that sets the mind wandering, the decisions that one has to grapple with in a split second etc.
Most of the fun in such a scenario is between the ears.
Looking forward eagerly for more.
Great!
I live part of the year in Paris and I wish something like this would happen to me! Keep writing!
Wow...
I want to get this train home from work!
Beautifully written, perfectly paced, VERY hot. Nice work :o)
EROTIC
Please continue to write more
I have read two of your stories and they are very well written
Paris Metro
excellent. you have to do all the Paris Metro stops, describes the trains, the seats, the time of day.
hot Hot HOT!!
... just like the inside of that Metro car! I agree with the other praise and hope we'll see more of these tales from the City of Light.
Fantastic!
This might be my favorite story on this website! Please write more stories about Paris, especially from the woman's point of view. I liked Ecole Militaire as well.
Wow!!! Sound too good to be true!
Very hot
Love the silent sex in public. More please!
wish i was her
i love stories that end with a good hot creampie
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