All Comments on 'Foreign Trade'

by michellefiamma

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tennesseeredtennesseeredover 14 years ago
Kept my attention

Further proof that women write better porn. I didn't get to know the characters very well but the dialogue was well done. Keep at it, mf, I think you can write a longer story and hold our interest.

bad_hobbitbad_hobbitover 14 years ago
Nicely written

Nice, tight story, straight to the point with no 'fillers'. And it stays hot. Well done.

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